please don't get rid of this story!

This story was really good! I really loved it!

ohk so i guess i should finally review!

awesome story!

forget about all those flames and sheizz i mean you ARE the writier of these stories and so you have the right to write whatever you want to.

and if they don't like it then why are they reading em' in the first place and why don't they just write there own stories..oh wait they can't so they just bash on those who really can.

anyways, GREAT STORY!

i love all of your T/R stories!

I HOPE YOU CAN WRITE MORE!

i've actually read most of them already. probaly 1 or 2 stories left! ah im running out of stories to read.

please make more!

*sorry too lazy to log in*

i liked it. my brother liked it when i told him about ryanna. he likes girls. i just am into yaoi so he isn't usually interested in what i read. but it was a very good story.

IT'S SO CUTE!

Great story, sorry about Simon10, he's just a jerk that wishs he could write as good as you do.

Keep writing, can't wait 'till the next story! :)

Okayz. I'm Backz. Great storyz! And I know I'm putting a z at the end of the word at the end of the sentacez. Luved it lotz. Keep up the good workz. And don't worry about ppl thinking about this being a mary-sue characterz. Byez, now

You just said "I did not base this character on myself" but then you said "These stories are from my experience." Little Miss Contradiction here. Maybe you should get your story straight.

Not only was this fic completely out of character, horribly cheesy and poorly formatted, but you also switched tenses about three times... and there are only three main tenses to work with.

To add insult to injury, rub salt in the wound, and all-in-all make a bad situation 10 times worse... IT'S A FREAKING MARY SUE!

Reality check... Nobody likes reading Mary Sue's. You could have at LEAST named your Mary Sue a Japanese name instead of using a blatant Americanized one.

Why don't you try working with the characters that are already in the series instead inserting a flawless depiction of yourself as a DBZ character?

*gags*

Glaringly obvious romance. At least you have some of the blindisms right. Go read Wandering Namek's fic for a better idea. _

Which symbol? the Lol or the _ . CUz I do both a lot. Anywayz, you welcome. Glad to share. Didn't expect a TY after the chapter. If its the LOL, I know a few more.

Lol lauh out loud

Lmao laughing my a*s off

rofl rolling on floor laughing

Brb be right back

hb hurry back

wgt way to go

Er- that's all I can think of right now. I know lots of faces too.

-_-" :{ ;} . _ :? ;/ _ I_I

See? I like the computer lots. Update soon!

Aw... That's some inner-turmoil. Poor Trunks and Ryanna. Wonder how Trunks is going to show her he DOES love her. Maybe when he gets his vision back? I donno. Update soon!

That was so kawaii! Great chapter. I'm living it! keep it coming! _

Hey good chappy..keep going!

That's gotta suck. Poor Trunks. I NEED my vision. Cuz otherwise I can't read fanfiction. *Shudders* anywayz, hope you update soon cuz I really want to know what happens!