|Reviews for Home|
| Marie King 3/28/11 . chapter 1
I am running out of adjectives to describe how good your writing is! LOL! I really loved this fan fic. I especially love these lines you wrote :
Shadow became a dream, a memory, but by the time the Alliance rained down fire on Serenity Valley, it wasn't home any longer
And I love this one as well:
But some time between Wash finally shaving that godforsaken moustache, and Mal coming into the dining area one morning to find Kaylee painting flowers on one pale yellow wall while Jayne cleaned his gun at the kitchen table, he realised that Serenity was as much a home to him as Shadow had ever been.
He just couldn't name the day or the hour.
You really encapsulated Mal's past and present and his thoughts during both times. Well done.
| Red Bess Rackham 10/12/06 . chapter 1
Oh, that was so good. Loved it.
Red Bess Rackham
| kas7 10/9/04 . chapter 1
Very good chapter.