this is a very good story, more chapåters plz.:)

Amazingly well written, and creative. Leave it to the warrior to know what he's doing, eh?

Aside from maybe working to make your action scenes flow a bit better, this is a damn impressive chapter. I could really visualise the places you described, and it certainly brought back some memories.

...essentially "WOW! Rock on Bucky!"

;)

Looking forward to the next chapter! (Try not to make them so long. It'll be 2005 (not a typo :D) by the time you get round to Diablo II