Hmm...the anime...not in much of a hurry to read that, I like the manga because it's easier to visualize.

Good! :D

I just knew Hisoka was going to do that. -.- I bet she still hates him in the morning though.

I'd think that Hisoka would change his outfit, take the cheek marks off and put his hair down if he was working at a hotel or whatever. And yeah, the marks on his cheeks aren't really tattoos, in the manga he was on Greed Island and he had just finished taking a bath when Gon, Biskuit, and Killua found him, so his hair was down and he didn't have the cheek marks. -.-;; I know too much...

Ah...I almost never watch animes...with the exception of Digimon. I'm still reading the manga online right now but at least I've gotten to this part.

O_O Dirty Hisoka...xD Go Dancho! That oughtta keep Machi in line!

Okies...I get the title now, I just don't think they would say gomen and san that much.

:D I think you got all the charcters down good...I just can';t really figure out the title... -.- You'd think it would be a little different.

I must say that i was a bit scaptical at first but the way the charcaters our developing in the story is quite amazing to me. I will give you snaps for that. I've just recentaly became interested in HunterxHunter and i think you are doing an excillent job of writing this story, it new chapter becomes more and more molding and open to your hand.

I looked at he date of udatation and would like to incourage to to continue writing this story. you've just started something amazing, lets not let those thoughts dwendle away.

-Lady DragonHeart

This is a really nice fanfic you have here. Keep up the good work and update soon!

i feel a sudden urge to scream at u to continue ;...this was ( and it still is!) an awesome fic! forget my long blurb i left last time...that did not in any way suffice in praising ur great piece of work here. excellent plotline and characters. with soemthing as good as this, it' a poopee thing to just let it float unfinished in teh middle of nowhere. this has got direction, thrill, suspense, humor, great on! keep writing, genius...this is one fic u can't forget that easily. _

since this is a longer fic, i can't be nit-picky because honestly, overall,...this-was-AMAZING. im completely blown away - actually, as i was reading, i was entirely absorbed by the phenomenal story u just put forth. the plotline was superbly fabricated; i was hanging by the suspense and riding along with the well-placed turn of events. excellent and absolutely FUN.

character development was great. i like the diff. pairings and how the other two pairings take some focus off machixhisoka. and i agree-that pairing was intriguing to play off of. i like ur portrayal of machi's stony exterior. so, well-done because far too often, authors make the girls fall too easily for the male lead. very in-character here.

to expound on ur character portrayals, i liked how u encompassed a variety of charries, not just machi. ie. donchou (however u spell that...), pakunoda (o yea! greatly appreciated how ur tying this all with ur memories. awesome work!), the rest of the Genei Ryodan in general, that girl that plays the piano here,...and watever other additional charries u added. sometimes, i forget that gon and killua are teh main charries inthe anime, since this fic did such an astounding offshoot of hunterxhunter...

as i was raving b4, ur plotline was fantastic. it was pretty complex (loved how machi has some secret past with that guy in addition to her prob with hisoka), but u executed the whole fic in at a very polished level. i enjoyed -no, LOVED- ur fic. kudos to u. thanks for such a great read. maybe u could get to updating this? it's really a fic that has-ARGH, running out of adjectives! see how good ur fic is? - potential and ur maintaining it just fine.

honestly, this deserved a wellthought-out review because this fic was, in itself, a well thought-out piece. update! and i will see what constructive criticism i can give...im tagging this fic _

love it! ur plot is fantastic! on with the next chappies!

aw...just so very good...but what happens next?please update as soon as possible

Hi,

i was looking for au good hxh fanfic, and I found your's... to bad you seem had stoped writing it, because it is on of the few good one I saw...

Te way you use the caracters is good, they are coerent with the manga (the only litle mistake i found is that i don't think Machi would let the boss doing something that she doesn't agree with just to be cleared of all responsability if anything goes wrong, she is a spider after all...

Did you stop writing because you have no more idea ? Or just because you miss time or interest to ?

Anyway I regreet it, 'cause i wonder what could have happend next...

I decided to write because even if you have stopped the fic, I known it's always conforting to see that somebody have read and liked it.

Bye

TLS

PS I'm french, so I hope you will forgive me for all the mistakes that I certainly have done.