excellent story so far! update with somemore hisoka/machi please

C'mon, we're dying here. Update, please? Don't tell me you've given up on this! Please, please, keep writing.

i like thisfic, only one of two good Machi x Hisoka fics that I have found. Machi x Hisoka fics seem to be rare in of itself so I am very pleasantly surprised by this story. Please continue it. Oh yes, it's nto possible for Hisoka to be able to peek at Machi's underwear due to her outfit. She wears blank spandex pants under her short kimono robe.

still no update? please don't leave the only decent hisoka x machi fanfic i've ever read hanging in the air.

wah! it's so good! i love machi hisoka U MUST CONTINUE!

*Lovely* fanfic. I really enjoy the way you write Hisoka and Machi, it seems to be really on the mark with their personalities. X3 I hope you can get another chapter out soon. Fanfics rarely grab my attention like this. Good job. :D

WA!

I was looking forward to reading the rest of this, and you just stopped after 9 chapters!

This story is really interesting, since there is so little MachiXHisoka fics.

Please update soon!

(forget about my crying earlier. I dont want to cry anymore. I just want you to continue the fic.)

Crimson Girl

I'm just getting to know this whole Hunter x Hunter thing, but I really love this story! It deals with action and romance and it's so suspenseful! This should be made into a small mini movie! You have excellent writing and I think that you should update this story really soon. I'm a fan waiting in eager anticipation and you must update soon! Wonderful writing and an excellent plot! What more can you ask for in a great story?

Man, I was so sad to come to the end of the ninth chapter when I realized it wa s the last chapter! Update soon!

Aw, poor Ryo! And the first nice friend Machi's made too! I was just wondering, wouldn't her first reaction be to grab the boy then jump over the counter? Hmm, well, all her life she's sort of solitary so I don't think she'll really firstly think of companions.

Anyway, brillinat story! Continue soon, ne?

Very well written. The characters weren't OOC at all. I could see how you've managed to reveal the humane side of each of the characters and you've done so very well.

It's true that there aren't a lot of Machi/Hisoka fics out there. I applaud you in your excellent efforts.

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hahah sorry i feel sorry for her parents for giving birth to such a retarded gayass. god bless them HAHA okayokay shes a stupid bitch seriously

u rokk. dont stop writing :D

HEY! theres a feeling of suspense, i feel it in the air. o.o ;)

emily summers is a stupid bitch. wuts the point of writing a comment if she dint even read ur story? gayass bitch. haha. go rot in fucking hell bitch.

anyway. love ur story _ really good. unique. yep

i kinda wanna see feitanmachi pairings too xD

heyhey. please ignore emily summers. no one gives a shit about her.. well i like ur story and its really rare to find such well written hisoka machi pairing. :D yep dont give up. and plus it also has other spiders involved in it too! really good i like i like.