|Reviews for Pakunoda's Memories|
| Shaoli 10/6/03 . chapter 9
Want more action. You're one of the few people who can make a fight scene interesting.
| Shaoli 10/6/03 . chapter 8
Shao does not like Kita...
And Boreonolf talked in the manga, if that helps. P
| Butthead 10/3/03 . chapter 8
I like this! No... Actually, I love it!
| name that's not taken 9/27/03 . chapter 8
Yay! This fic is great It seems like good Ryodan centered fics are rare, and I'm really happy to see someone actually exploring the characters that have less screen time or character development in the series. Also, it's cool to find someone who actually includes Pakunoda in their fic, even if it's only in memories, rather than just leaving her out entirely. She's way too underappreciated in general. Also, it's cool to see someone besides Wusai using Feitan as a major character. only one thing could make this better... any chance of Phinx x Feitan? ::ducks:: Keep writing, please
| purple hotagi 9/26/03 . chapter 8
Hm... I wonder what'll happen if she asks Feitan to tell her what he looks like again. What'll he say, 'Dark'?
Machi as a seamstress? Well, considering her skills in sewing, I suppose it is a really good choice. But then imagining her in a frilly maid's outfit... _
Kuroro and Hisoka. Hm... I'd say Kuroro is flirting with death. Same for Hisoka, for that matter. And why doesn't he just attack Kuroro, so their fight can start already? I mean, he has got Kuroro alone at last.
| DraejonSoul 9/16/03 . chapter 7
I haven't come back to read this for a while. Been busy with work, gomen.
Things are really odd with the Ryodan. But what's really intruiging are Kuroro's actions.
Then there's Feitan. I remember him receiving Pakunoda's nen bullet. So is it her memories that's making him a bit 'soft'?
I never thought Phinx can be a comic relief, but I think the guy had it coming. P
Ah. . . can't think anymore. Gomen again. -_-; But I'm looking forward to the other chapters.
| Shaoli 9/14/03 . chapter 7
Nen fertilizer. XD
What can i say? Go Hisoka!
| Shaoli 9/14/03 . chapter 6
*stops short of pouncing on the OC with a heavy weapon*
If you say so. i trust you can make this something different.
| Shaoli 9/14/03 . chapter 5
Can't believe i missed a couple of updates.
W00t! Go Kurotopi! Lovely little air of mysteriousness hinting at a deeper plot, altough it's a tactic you use rather often...
i'm veru confused by the living arrangements, and how being married could possibly linked to protection. Ah well.
| noirrouge 9/14/03 . chapter 7
GO! GO! i like it! GO! GO!
| purple hotagi 9/13/03 . chapter 7
...That was sweet. Really sweet. And Hisoka was downright odd... but then again, the enigmatic magician always was that way. LOL
So the Mafia know nen too? And they use it on their FERTILIZER? O_O I feel sorry for Phinx... and I no longer look at gardening in the same light!
Machi's dream was strange. Why would Pakunoda give her the memories of when Kuroro first started the Geneiryodan? Especially since Machi was there too, at the time? More importantly, why would Machi be so disturbed by the memories?
...In any case, good as always. Please continue!
| Nes Mikel 9/10/03 . chapter 6
I don't usually give reviews, but it is only fitting I review a fic made by the author who reviewed my fic.
So far, well done. Hisoka's twisted mind and Machi's personality is well described. I especially like how you try to develop Feitan's character.
Personally, I would like to see Bonorenof in action a bit more, as he's the probably the most underdeveloped and ignored character within the Ryodan. I have yet to see a fic that develops Benorenof nicely. If you could develop Feitan as a character (yet another rather underdeveloped character), it would be interesting how Bonorenof will fit into the fic.
Keep up the good work.
| Raving Psychotic 9/9/03 . chapter 6
Great story! Can't wait for more Nice content and writing, although I don't think Shizuku is that sort of a 'rules-regulations' person...but oh well (_)
| birdy4 9/9/03 . chapter 5
Oh, I think you're great writer! That's all I wanted to say, I think the ryodan are exciting.
keep on going!
| DemonDeranged 9/8/03 . chapter 5
This is quite interesting! I can't wait for more!