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Mia
2004-10-26
ch 1, anon.
abuse*sniff* *sniff* So sad. I nearly started crying because thats exactly what me and my family did for my grandad's funeral. *sniff* Wagh!
(:{) (Runs over to a dark corner) I need to be alone now.
Yume
2004-10-06
ch 8, anon.
abuse...I actually started crying...that was so...sad..that Mimiru died...seing that she is my favorite charater and always will be.
Ryouko
2004-08-23
ch 7, anon.
abuseOH! this is a real sad story... poor mimiru! I don't believe in all the ascending heaven bit cos i believe that when you die, you return to the earth mother and wait to live again. It's a really touching story and you've wrote it so even those who don't know the pain can understand it.
good story
Ryouko
2004-08-23
ch 2, anon.
abusenot bad so far. wish the chapters can be a bit longer, I'm gonna read the rest of the chapters!
PrincessSakura4
2004-08-19
ch 8,
abuseKacchi: O this is so good!

Ayumi: I love it so much! You had better continue writing it!

Mizuwaka: Relax Ayumi she's a cool author, I'm sure she'll continue

Chibi-Usa: You know what, she's inspired me to write a new fic ^_^

Ichiro: Forgove me Chibi-Usa but you have to talent in writing.

Chibi-Usa begins to cry and Mizuwaka rubs her hand on Chibi-Usa's head

Mizuwaka: It's okay Princess

Kacchi: I have an idea, how about we make a fic together, can write, Mizuwaka and Ichiro can come up with the plot, Chibi-Usa and Ayumi can come up with some ideas and then we've got a fic.

Ichiro: Great idea Kacchi, but for now let's put this fic on our fav. list that way we can keep checking back!

Chibi-Usa: *Sniff* Keep *sniff sniff* it up

Mizuwaka: Mind reading one of the stories we've made already, please?

Kacchi: Keep it up

Everyone: See ya ^_^
PrincessSakura4
2004-08-18
ch 7,
abuse*sniff sniff* Good job. I hope you will continue writing. Your story has touched me. I'm not afraid to die anymore. If my leukemia does kill me, I'll be all right. Thank you.
legendary.hacker
2004-08-11
ch 1,
abuseThis is good. I read your other .hack stories,and i agree about tsukasa/mimiru ^_^
KGR
2004-07-20
ch 6,
abuseI like this story, not the whole thing about Mimiru about to die or whatever but about the story itself and how things happen, if i could rate it it would be 10/10
sora
2004-07-19
ch 2, anon.
abuseBone, Bone, Bone, Bone, Bone, Bone, Bone, Bone, Bone.
Tell me whatcha gonna do [now, tell me what . . .] when there ain't nowhere to run,
when judgment comes for you, when judgement comes for you?
And whatcha gonna do [now, tell me what . . . ] when there ain't nowhere to hide,
when judgement comes for you, 'cause it's gonna come for you?
Let's all bring it in for Wally, Eazy, C's Uncle Charlie, Little Boo. God's got 'em. And I'm gonna miss everybody I done roll
with, (flows my gauge/gang). Looked at him while he lay. When playin' with destiny, play too deep for me to say. Little
Layzie came to me, told me if he should decease well then, please bury me by my Gran Gran and when you can, come follow
me.God bless you. Workin' on a plan to heaven, follow the Lord all twenty-four-seven days. God is who we praise, even though
the devil's all up in my face. But He's keepin' me safe and in my place. Say grace to engage the race without a chance to face
the Judge, sayin' again my soul won't budge. Grudge because there's no mercy for thugs. Ooh, what can I do? It's all about a
family and how we roll. Can I get a witness? Let it unfold. We livin' our lives to eternal our souls. A-oh, a-oh.
Hey, and we pray, and we pray, and we pray, and we pray everyday, everyday, everyday, everyday, and we pray, and we
pray, and we pray, and we pray, still we lay.
Now, follow me, roll, stroll, whether it's hell or it's heaven. Come, let us go take a visit to the people that's long gone their rest,
Wally, Eazy, Terry, Boo. It's steady creepin' up on my family. Exactly how many days we got lastin'? While you laughin',
we're passin' passin' away. Now, rest y'all souls, 'cause I know I'm a meet you up at the Crossroad. Y'all know, you forever
got love from them Bone thugs, baby.
Little Eazy's long gone. Really wish he could come home, but when it's time to die, gotta go bye-bye. All a little thug could do
is cry, cry. Why'd they kill my dog? Damn, man, I miss my Uncle Charles, y'all. And he shouldn't be gone in front of his
home. What they did to Boo was wrong. Oh, so wrong, so wrong. Gotta hold on. Gotta stay strong. When the day, comes
better believe Bone gotta shoulder you can lean on.
Hey, and we pray, and we pray, and we pray, and we pray everyday, everyday, everyday, everyday, and we pray, and we
pray, and we pray, and we pray everyday, everyday, everyday, everyday.
See you at the Crossroads [Crossroads, Crossroads, Crossroads],
so you won't be lonely.
And I'm gonna miss everybody.
Long gone.
Livin' in a hateful world. Send me straight to heaven. That's how we roll.
And I'm askin' the good Lord, "Why?" and sigh. He told me we lived to die.
What's up with that murder, y'all? See my little cousin was hung. Somebody, really wrong. Everybody want to test this dog,
and Ms. Sleazy set up Eazy to fall. You know why we sinnin'? And Krayzie intendin' on endin' it when it ends. Murder come
again, again, and again. Now, tell me whatcha gonna do?
Can somebody, anybody tell me why, hey, can somebody, anybody tell me why we die, we die?
I don't wanna die. Oh, so wrong, so wrong, so wrong.
See you at the Crossroads [Crossroads, Crossroads, Crossroads],
so you won't be lonely.

take this in ur friends memory R.I.P
PrincessSakura4
2004-05-06
ch 5,
abuseThis is such a good story. It means so much to me. I'll be back for the next chapter.
Claude Kenni
2004-05-06
ch 5,
abuseNice story, I like this one a lot. ^^ It's cool how you wrote this and actually did research on it and threw in the stages of denial, anger, and acceptence.
If there was one thing about this story I did not like, It'd have to be the party in this chapter. It was cute and well written, and sure Ginkan might show up, but Balmung? Or Helba for that matter? Even if Balmung were feasible, Helba would not be. Of course that's my opinion, but maybe it works for this story; less cliche than just having the regular nine people show up.
Anywho, good story and keep up with the updates...while trying to finish my own story I need others to read you know! ^~
Minkachan
2004-05-03
ch 5,
abuseHee, very nice and sweet. ^-^ Though, I do think that Bear's real name is Ryo Sakuma. ('kuma' meaning 'bear')
PrincessSakura4
2003-11-30
ch 4,
abuseVery good story! Domo arigato for writing it. Keep updating and I'll be back!
Saori The Wind Goddess
2003-11-23
ch 4,
abuseThis is a very good chapter!! *Glomps you* I think this is very interesting, and I hope you update soon!!

Yours Truly,
Saku
Spanner
2003-11-18
ch 4,
abuseI have never lost a relative to cancer, and consider myself very fortunate in that. Even so, it's good to have stories like this one that allow the reader to understand the kind of pain such tragedies cause. This story is very touching, and I hope you continue it to it's end, whether that end is uplifting, or tragic, or both.

In answer to your question, Kareshi Kanojo on Jijou was released under the name His and Her Circumstances in the US. I will send you a seperate e-mail, just in case I'm the first to provide you with this answer, 'cause I'd rather not include my e-mail here.

Keep writing! ^_^V
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