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| Garowyn 2006-10-27 ch 1,  | abuseGood work, even if the ending is not as desirable with KibaHina fans. It still makes for a good story with a slight twist. |
| Essyllus 2006-10-20 ch 1, | abuseI knew it. How it was going to end. Love the awkwardness. And it's so obvious. That's how I like my KibaHina- unsure and realistic. I liked the interaction and Hinata's detachment toward the end. The ending seemed a bit abrupt though. Good job. |
| DimLight 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abuseaw ^.^ |
| amwong88 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abusevery believable. Kiba is rather adorable, what with his bluster and devotion to Hinata. Lovely fic! |
| gatogirl1 2004-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseHm, this computer won't take cookies, so I can't send you a signed review...but I have to tell you how much I liked this! And I can totally see this sorta relationship too...Hinata's too good for Naruto...or maybe not...this situation seems suspiciously similar to the Sasuke/Naruto/Sakura triangle...^_^ But Muy Bien! |
| anko 2004-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw. that was just so damn sweet; i can barely stand it. i want to pat kiba on the head, but he'd probably try to bite me ... damn. it looks like those are all your one-shot narutos...please write more. |
| >_ 2004-01-11 ch 1, anon. | abusePOOR KIBA-KUN! I"VE ALWAYS THOUGHT KIBA AND HINATA WOULD MAKE A CUTE COUPLE~ |
| ....... 2003-10-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseNO! You have to finish the story and plz more Kiba and Hinata.lol good so far |
| Morien Alexander 2003-07-31 ch 1, | abuseOh! That was so sweet and sad and cute and ... I loved it. Kibanata all the way! |
| yurimi-neko 2003-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww...poor kiba... well even tho i am VERY obsessed with naru/hina.. FINE!!I'll admit that I DO like this fic..hmph!so there! but you must noe that i am still that same obsessed 11 yr.old naru/hina fan.hmph. |
| Kerrie-chan 2003-07-29 ch 1, | abuseaw I feel bad for Kiba! good ficcy.. i hope you continuye ^^' |
| deadfornow 2003-07-29 ch 1, | abuseThat's...so very sweet. You have a really firm grasp on their characters. It's wunnerful to see this pairing being written so well. |
| SolarFire2 2003-07-29 ch 1, | abuseAh, I do so enjoy your Naruto one-shots. Always well written, pleasant, and in-character. And, I've noticed, always featuring Kiba. Heh. |
| Blinkie 2003-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuse:3 this is such a cute story!! tell me there is more? |
| Zephyr Wind 2003-07-29 ch 1, | abusecool |