Oh my god! This is great! What a cliffhanger. I have to know what's going to happen to Dylan. And how about Anthony? What is he going to do? Please continue with this story. I know it has been a while since you've last updated but post more as soon as you can. Pretty please?:D

Such a shame that this will seemigly go unfinished!

A brilliant and promising start.

I wish, wish you'd finish this but I doubt it.

Fuck! This is an awesome fic. But it's never going to be finished, is it? *cries*

No! Dont leave us hanging. What will happen next?
BTW I love your descriptive passages, wonderful writing.

AHH! Why did the Thin Man do that?! I can't BELIEVE YOU, SCARR! Alright meaningless complaints aside, you did a fabulous job, and i'm glad that it was an extra long chapter.

Ouch! How's Dylan/Helen going to survive this? Also, what happened to Madison Lee?

Where did she get stabbed?! Great chapter, but you've gotta continue this! Soon! ^.^

Leaving me on the edge of my seat! I can't wait to see what happens next. I could picture the part where The Thin Man realized it was Dylan he stabbed, so perfectly. Very well written, I thought it was great.

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No!
Tell me you didn't end the chapter like _that_.
Your writing's brilliant, the scenarios described to perfection, and the plot is just begging to explode!
Hurry up with the next chapter!

Oh my god...you seriously cannot stop there...please please update really soon! My heart literally sank when I hit the bottom of the page. I need to know what happens - it's a great cliffhanger! Oh lord what did the Thin Man do...can't wait to read more!

This is my combined review for chapters 1 and 2...sorry I didn't do that one seperately, I couldn't tear myself away long enough to write. I HAD to keep reading. This is an awesome story and I love the titles that section off the chapters. I liked "Wardrobe: Dress to kill (In both aspects)" a lot...and the "way to go, Xena" comment made me laugh out loud. Anyway, I'm off to read the next chapter...keep going cause this is so good!!

Riveting and well written.
I love the new characters you've set up in the story..they don't take the limelight away but have a definite purpose. The doctor reminds me of Severus Snape from HP. *lol*

Once again, your ability to weave a story amazes me.

Can I be you when I grow up?

Yes, finally an update! Powerful chapter, that ending. Whoa. You have to update again soon, don't leave us hanging for long please!