I really liked the detail it made me feel like i was there in the act. It sucked me in and didn't let me go and wasn't trashy. Bravo!

WHOA. Fucking clever ending. You rock. Wasn't expecting it.

Wow...I've never, ever thought of Amsterdam/Johnny before.

Great job! )

-Dominique

bloddy clever ficlet! i wasn't expecting a johnny/amsterdam slash at the end.. but it fit so perfectly! again, completely brilliant.

YAY! i was hoping it was slash. gah, i'm glad i wasn't the only one thinking JOHNNY/VALLON! hahaah

Hey nice! Explains a lot from the movie actually ;)

I was so thinking that during the movie! Seeing Vallon with Jenny, I was going "aww, poor Johnny" because they were so fucking each other, weren't they?

OH!

damn, that blew me away. i wasn't expecting that at all.

good freaking job, mate.

-misprint

here's yer knife

Damn! That was a surprise at the end! Great little ficlet! Good POV.