Reviews for The Spoiled Cinderella
Tiger Lily21 8/29/03 . chapter 2
Hi! It's me! I'm just writing this to tell you that I got your review and to say thanks for being so nice! You made my day. I'm taking the story A Mermaid's Tale off and putting on a Cinderella story to begin a "book" I'm working on called Fairy Tales Reborn. Don't worry, A Mermaid's Tale will be in there but Cinderella comes first. Please review it when it is up. I will review another chapter of your story to tell you when.

Thanks again!

Toodles!

-Tiger Lily

P.S. Good story! Keep up the good work!
kaio 8/28/03 . chapter 8
"No, that's the strangest. Jeanette is balding, extremely fat, and has mottled skin."

*bursts into laughter* omg that was great! _ you defenitly need to update soon!
Dara finVidya 8/25/03 . chapter 7
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different I must say. And Yes the chapters are short but I've seen shorter.
Claidi 8/24/03 . chapter 7
the plot thickens! update soon!
SumiFritzN 8/19/03 . chapter 6
HAHA to the Sewing and Fabrics lady! HAHAHA! Boy did she get a shocker. I liked how you built the characters so well... very nice. I like the shop keeping. *Wonders who the engagment ring is for* keep update por favor! :)
Silver Witch 8/18/03 . chapter 6
i like your character
EvenSong 8/13/03 . chapter 5
oh -sniff- what happens? update soon. i wanna know...and i can't know unless you update...so...update!
Silver Witch 8/12/03 . chapter 5
i like it, please continue
cherrychica 8/12/03 . chapter 5
Isnt the ruby a little unlikely?

CherryChica
cherrychica 8/12/03 . chapter 1
That was a good chapter! Moremore!

CherryChica
Claidi 8/9/03 . chapter 4
Only three weeks to the ball? Hmm, actually, I find that a rather long time to prepare... :) Heehee... BUt then, I can't help but doubt that letter. No, it's not the story, it's just that I have athing about guys and lying... Hehe...great so far so OBVIOUSLY! UPDATE! :)
EvenSong 8/9/03 . chapter 4
you have to update this! please hurry! i like it... ethan is nice! i likedthe portrayal of the palace servants as snots. heh heh. update...
Bibliophile 8/7/03 . chapter 1
hottness? not exactly Fairie Tale language, but I LOVE your perspective
Athena 8/4/03 . chapter 3
this short story made me laugh and wince. i loved it the description of madames hair i thought i was going to cry from laughter. i wish that this story hadnt ended when it did i want to know what ethan who i believe should be mine..just joking... had really done the kissing as a bet or not wait ok so i just answered my question. yes but i highly recomened this story..but who ever wrote this will you finish it for me and other pple please

Athena
Claidi 8/4/03 . chapter 3
Interesting...

:) Update sooN!
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