| Reviews for The Spoiled Cinderella |
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Tiger Lily21 8/29/03 . chapter 2Hi! It's me! I'm just writing this to tell you that I got your review and to say thanks for being so nice! You made my day. I'm taking the story A Mermaid's Tale off and putting on a Cinderella story to begin a "book" I'm working on called Fairy Tales Reborn. Don't worry, A Mermaid's Tale will be in there but Cinderella comes first. Please review it when it is up. I will review another chapter of your story to tell you when. Thanks again! Toodles! -Tiger Lily P.S. Good story! Keep up the good work! |
kaio 8/28/03 . chapter 8 "No, that's the strangest. Jeanette is balding, extremely fat, and has mottled skin." *bursts into laughter* omg that was great! _ you defenitly need to update soon! |
Dara finVidya 8/25/03 . chapter 7er different I must say. And Yes the chapters are short but I've seen shorter. |
Claidi 8/24/03 . chapter 7the plot thickens! update soon! |
SumiFritzN 8/19/03 . chapter 6HAHA to the Sewing and Fabrics lady! HAHAHA! Boy did she get a shocker. I liked how you built the characters so well... very nice. I like the shop keeping. *Wonders who the engagment ring is for* keep update por favor! :) |
Silver Witch 8/18/03 . chapter 6i like your character |
EvenSong 8/13/03 . chapter 5oh -sniff- what happens? update soon. i wanna know...and i can't know unless you update...so...update! |
Silver Witch 8/12/03 . chapter 5i like it, please continue |
cherrychica 8/12/03 . chapter 5Isnt the ruby a little unlikely? CherryChica |
cherrychica 8/12/03 . chapter 1That was a good chapter! Moremore! CherryChica |
Claidi 8/9/03 . chapter 4Only three weeks to the ball? Hmm, actually, I find that a rather long time to prepare... :) Heehee... BUt then, I can't help but doubt that letter. No, it's not the story, it's just that I have athing about guys and lying... Hehe...great so far so OBVIOUSLY! UPDATE! :) |
EvenSong 8/9/03 . chapter 4 you have to update this! please hurry! i like it... ethan is nice! i likedthe portrayal of the palace servants as snots. heh heh. update... |
Bibliophile 8/7/03 . chapter 1 hottness? not exactly Fairie Tale language, but I LOVE your perspective |
Athena 8/4/03 . chapter 3 this short story made me laugh and wince. i loved it the description of madames hair i thought i was going to cry from laughter. i wish that this story hadnt ended when it did i want to know what ethan who i believe should be mine..just joking... had really done the kissing as a bet or not wait ok so i just answered my question. yes but i highly recomened this story..but who ever wrote this will you finish it for me and other pple please Athena |
Claidi 8/4/03 . chapter 3Interesting... :) Update sooN! |