keep writing keep writing the story is getting so good so far!!

Ah, finally an update. Hmm, so that little brat is actually just a dummy. I knew it! Ah please update, the story is just barely revealing itself

ah been waiting for so long for this update... thanks. Anyway, i can already see the story unfolding now. I can even imagine it, it sounds so realistic. Please update soon!
thanks

I loved that though it was to much of a cliffhanger

good setup, wonder what the dreams mean

PLZ continue it was O K!

please update soon!

cant wait for the next chapter!

hey
that was really good i like this alot and i hope that u write a lot more chap soon b/c im going on vaca in a week and i wont be able to read it for a long time till i get back i dont know wut im going to do with no comp well at least i will have a tv anyway pleaz up date soon

THIS WAZ SO GOOD!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

the only problem was that "boton" is spelt B-O-T-A-N
and you wrote that she flys a broom...itz an oar

but thatz ok, cuz other than that this waz really great!

ah sounds very very interesting, already caught my attention. I like how you started it off. Bit yusuke/keiko is good too =)