 karagrace 2009-09-02 . chapter 1HA! Loved the dog analogy-great comparision!! |
 EbonyFox 2004-08-01 . chapter 1hahaha. Funny. Interestingly so. |
 Jaina Solo2 2004-01-16 . chapter 1Hehe, that was hilarious AND sweet! It would be priceless to hear that conversation between Carvallo and Sara. |
 Jane Doe 2003-12-27 . chapter 1Never thought of the GSR to be closely related to dog breeding. It was very original :D and loved it.
Of course if there is anyway Grissom and Sara get together then it is worth enjoying!
~Jane |
 oh-four-seven 2003-10-07 . chapter 1 cool! ;) |
 Grav 2003-09-29 . chapter 1Hee! Beautifully done. Funny and sweet, with your excellent style. I especially liked the bit at the end.
Grav |
 LynnM 2003-09-03 . chapter 1This story is really well written. The analogy between show dogs and the CSI's is great, especially if you let your mind wander a bit to the reaction Sara would give if Carvallo spun that one with her! Thanks for writing. |
 AngusH 2003-08-16 . chapter 1Wonderful, wonderful.
I was laughing by the end. ROFL
Might there be a second chapter with a much annoyed Carvallo realising what has happened? |
 The Sugar Plum Fairy 2003-08-13 . chapter 1LOVED the whole Nick thing with the accent adn the squirrels! |
 Anki 2003-08-03 . chapter 1::snicker:: cute! |
 luxor 2003-07-30 . chapter 1You tease! This was brilliant (as always)! Please, more more more! |
 Jane Moss 2003-07-30 . chapter 1Hehe! Very amusing! Old Carvallo didn't see that one coming, eh? In his face! LMAO! Great story!
JM |
 Peggie 2003-07-30 . chapter 1 Look into my eyes...deeper...deeper...repeat after me..."I will write more...I will write more.."
Burked, as always, this is unique and wonderful! |
 Grissom's Girl 2003-07-30 . chapter 1 ROTFLMAO!
"I'm not even going to swing at that slow pitch"!
I LOVE that line. He. And I loved the analogy of raising and showing dogs. And what a marvelous way around Grissom's roadblock. And though I don't hope for this on the show (it would remove our favorite CSI from the show), it so works as a fic. :)
Great job. Thanks for posting this. It gets two thumbs up from me. |
 Elory 2003-07-30 . chapter 1 Oh but this was clever.
Very well done. |