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karagrace
2009-09-02 . chapter 1
HA! Loved the dog analogy-great comparision!!
EbonyFox
2004-08-01 . chapter 1
hahaha. Funny. Interestingly so.
Jaina Solo2
2004-01-16 . chapter 1
Hehe, that was hilarious AND sweet! It would be priceless to hear that conversation between Carvallo and Sara.
Jane Doe
2003-12-27 . chapter 1
Never thought of the GSR to be closely related to dog breeding. It was very original :D and loved it.
Of course if there is anyway Grissom and Sara get together then it is worth enjoying!
~Jane
oh-four-seven
2003-10-07 . chapter 1
cool! ;)
Grav
2003-09-29 . chapter 1
Hee! Beautifully done. Funny and sweet, with your excellent style. I especially liked the bit at the end.

Grav
LynnM
2003-09-03 . chapter 1
This story is really well written. The analogy between show dogs and the CSI's is great, especially if you let your mind wander a bit to the reaction Sara would give if Carvallo spun that one with her! Thanks for writing.
AngusH
2003-08-16 . chapter 1
Wonderful, wonderful.

I was laughing by the end. ROFL

Might there be a second chapter with a much annoyed Carvallo realising what has happened?
The Sugar Plum Fairy
2003-08-13 . chapter 1
LOVED the whole Nick thing with the accent adn the squirrels!
Anki
2003-08-03 . chapter 1
::snicker:: cute!
luxor
2003-07-30 . chapter 1
You tease! This was brilliant (as always)! Please, more more more!
Jane Moss
2003-07-30 . chapter 1
Hehe! Very amusing! Old Carvallo didn't see that one coming, eh? In his face! LMAO! Great story!

JM
Peggie
2003-07-30 . chapter 1
Look into my eyes...deeper...deeper...repeat after me..."I will write more...I will write more.."

Burked, as always, this is unique and wonderful!
Grissom's Girl
2003-07-30 . chapter 1
ROTFLMAO!

"I'm not even going to swing at that slow pitch"!

I LOVE that line. He. And I loved the analogy of raising and showing dogs. And what a marvelous way around Grissom's roadblock. And though I don't hope for this on the show (it would remove our favorite CSI from the show), it so works as a fic. :)

Great job. Thanks for posting this. It gets two thumbs up from me.
Elory
2003-07-30 . chapter 1
Oh but this was clever.

Very well done.
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