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| Code Name:X-Lazer 2008-04-02 ch 8, anon. | abuseWow!Awesome!My favourite part of the fic is when Tai and Matt told the other Digidesined about the news.I truly like it,and this summer 2008 April I'm gonna see what happened and what is the new face and looks of Kari and TK.And I wish you give me some advice on writing a digimon Fanfic,'cause i'm gonna write my very first digimon fic but i think it'll be long ti'll i can put it on the web and if you write another fic i'll read it if i find it.Bye!Toluloo!And thanks for the fic. |
| Soldiermon 2007-11-06 ch 1,  | abusei highly agree with the others you should put up a sequal. you should take a look at my story it's called "young parents" and it's in the rated m section of i would like to see what you think of it |
| Soldiermon 2007-11-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good but Tk & Kari should have been Fourteen |
| digitalmonster911 2007-09-09 ch 8, anon. | abuseTell. Me. How. To. Get. To. Sequel. Now. |
| Cherry Akira Li 2007-07-12 ch 8, | abusehow sweet please finish the sequel |
| PrincessOfTheDigimon 2007-05-27 ch 8, | abuseSEQUEL FIRST! |
| sol badguy 2007-01-05 ch 8, anon. | abusethere i sat...looking at screen and saw:"...Tai, I'm pregnant...". my heart STOPPED! as you put it, a wierd fic. but still a good one. (with TK an Kari, everything seems to go) you're a good author. and a good person if you ask me. keep up the good work(wich this). TAKARI4EVER! |
| Kari Kamyia 2006-11-30 ch 8, | abuseYou Bettr make a new one on New Years Eve because That's My birthday |
| Aleshia 2006-11-29 ch 8, anon. | abuseAre You Sure Your Going To Make an endind because you souldn't talk about the story like that because i rally loved it it was so cute i almost cried. |
| puasluoma 2006-08-05 ch 8, | abuseAw so sweet but... 13! oyou could have said 15 or 16! 13! omg |
| Xx Trinity xX 2006-07-02 ch 8, | abuseKinda...weird...but...I like it... |
| candice 2006-04-20 ch 8, anon. | abusedat was a awesome story. i liked it alot. write the sequel first then follow up with the perquel. anyway in the sequel make sure there is noisy neigbors reaction. Also how there friends from school react tto the news. write me to let me know when the sequel or perquel is finished. GREAT STORY. |
| Cezaria 2006-02-01 ch 8, | abuseDespite I'll probably be flamed for whatever I say. I think it's best if you take a few constructive criticism. First, you have nearly no description in your story, any description you had was very short and did not give readers are very good idea what's going on. This did improve by the later chapters though. Also, the story is somewhat illogical. How can the children still act so happy and play around with their digimon when something like this is happening? Do you know how it feels even to SUSPECT that you're pregnant, much less than knowing you definitely are pregnant? Also I think, as possible that TK and Kari could have had sex at 13 years old, TK isn't that irresponsible to do so. I think you still need more practise at writing stories. Although this might not be bad for a start. |
| sheltie 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseshort, but good |
| xxxKaizerZoldaxxx 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abusenice story. get on with the sequel. I want to know what is Faith Takaishi's mission in the digimon world. keep up the good work |