oh you did amazing

AWW! so cute! good story.

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That was...
good...
It stunned me for a while, I guess. I'm not used to reading _good_ Lina/Zel pairings... so... yay for you. Hoorah, you're the first one to write a good one that I've read. (Though I haven't read many.)
You surprised the randomness out of me,
Diana-sama
(maybe I will log in... nah.)

Sweetness! I likes! Warm and waffy...

That was cute!

ok gag! that was a little too sweet for my taste... don't get me wrong it wass good and well writen the plot could have used a little more meat but the song went with the whole thing very well (now to end with th typical cliché) it was good keep up the good work

It's a really sweet piece. Breaks apart that stone-boy's barrier ne?

Very, very well done!

good story...better than some Lina/Zel fics (though i do like the couple) I've read...good characterization especially on Zelgadis

That's so good! I wish you add more! I love to Lina/Zel couple thing, I just can't stand Gourry. Besides, he wouldn't fit in a high school situation. Good job, I hope you continue it!

How cute! _ I love Lina/Zel fics, this was so awesome! Write more!

ooh... ANOTHER Lina/Zel fic... more delusional people... ick

I like this a lot... the world needs more Lina/Zel coupledom. Write more, please!

aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww! how sweet!