I know this is seven years late, but interesting concept you've got here! It's the typical ancient-evil-that-broke-free-from-its-prison-and-t ries-to-take-over-the-world story, but I find the thing with the 5 Knights (although, there's only 4 here) quite interesting.

I also love how you said the Sailor Scouts were the weakest sorceresses in the universe! I may not know that much about Sailor Moon, but from what I've seen, I can tell it's stupid!

I know you haven't worked on this story at all, but I hope you can get to it. After reading your SM/SW fanfics, I can tell this one will be pretty good(that is if you work on it at all).

Raika out!