I think this is a very nice story, ive read this chapter and the "Guardian" but I wanna see more of Leomon! and having him in action, because he is the greatest digimon ever :)

OH great.
A cliffhanger...the joy. Please PLEASE PLEASEY PLEASEY PLEASE continue from where you left off. Man, you write REALLY well.
Icing :P

I've kept track of your fan fiction since I read invisible and I think it's great. Keep writing, I want to see how it turns out.

I liked how you described the rainy day and the people instead of going straight for the main point of Matt finding the girl right from the start. And something I forgot to mention in a review before, I like the T.K. becoming the older brother of Matt thing going on the last chapter. Hmm..would make a nice fic...::lightbulb goes off:: ooo another inspiration for a fic...if I ever get the time to write_