 Maia2 7/31/03 . chapter 1First of all, for me? *melts*
Now on to the fic: I just love the way you managed to add so much with just a few words. Pretty impressive. Explains so much. And some of the lines you use are just breathtaking.
"Act casual." Alec rolled his shoulders to loosen their tension, then stuffed his hands in his pockets and slowed his walk to a relaxed saunter.
That line ROCKS!
Great job hon.
Maia. |
 gobbledigook 7/31/03 . chapter 1 Hey Infie!
I completely agree with you, the change in attitude between those two scenes seems to have gone totally unexplained in the show. No continuity!
But now, with your scene, it actually makes SENSE!I love how you've done such a great job of explaining what happened and making the transition from A to B and yet it's still pretty short and compact. In just a couple of parts, you've made something that fits the scenes before and after pretty much perfectly.
If I ever rewatch the episodes,(and even if I don't) your scene will be mentally inserted in as the way it should've been! Long live continuity, ra ra ra! :D Thanks Infie! |