Aw...That was so sweet...And so beautiful...*sniffles* Look, now you've made me all sentimental...

Not bad. Not bad at all.

it's a very nice story

very good poem keep at it

"I love this fic," and that is all that can be said.

Wow.. that's.. really, really good. O_O

sniff..sniff...Beautiful, simply beautiful.

Firstly, I don't know why you'd get flamed for a Marle/Crono fic, 'specially considering it's series canon. :) Secondly, although I hate the pairing, this was beautifully written. Kudos.

Touching. Evocative. C&M...keep it up!

Misfire

This is very sweet, but the ending seems somewhat sad.