Lol, I like this story, very cute. A little weird in some places, but not everyone's sense of humor is the same. But all in all good work, and thank you for a fun read.

-Holly

Very well written story. Definately a favorite.

I think you deserve a very large shiny award for writing this story. I absolutely loved every little bit of it!
~SW

That made my 2x5 fangirlness squeal ^_^;;

It was very interesting trying to read through the first 2 or 3 chapters because of the formatting problems with the italics and whatnot, but I managed it, and I'm glad I did.

Almost cried in the first chap, though. ::sigh::

Whew! Last review and then I can go to bed. It's a reading thing, you see. Can't leave a good story behind. SO!

Oh my goodness! This was one of my two favorite stories on the entire flippin' site! I'm gonna have to come back and reread it like a million times! You have an incredible, amazing, just SO talented ability to pace yourself, to do dialogue, to add description but allow the picture to make its own self at times, and some seriously grand talent at just writing very well. Think about getting published anytime soon? I WILL be reading the rest of your stuff. And this one is amazing. A complete different take on the traditional story and all. But sweet and funny and oddly enough, safe. Dunno why that word fits so well, but there's no ick in this hell, even though it's very icky, and heaven just decks itself out perfectly, the angels are precious and God is amazing with that sense of humor of His and a heck of a lot of love mingled in. And the pilots are amazing, and I LOVE how you ended Heero's saga. It would have broken my heart to have him remember that kinda stuff. And .. and.. and... I'm tired, but I'd gladly ramble on. I should hush now, suffice it to say, however, that I adore this story! And I do hope you turn your hand to sharing the talent for telling a story with the rest of the world. It's rare to read something so.. perfect. :)

Oh fer heaven's sake! I can't NOT post to each one. Sory! hee hee. It could be the late hour, but this chapter is BEAUTIFUL! Especially that small two line conversation between Michael and God about doubting self and Duo and God... or not Duo and God, actually, but self. Bother, crying about that one and not altogether sure why. This is beautiful. (And I am definitely NOT a demon/angel fic fan at all .. just goes to show ya, don't it, that there's always an exception to the rule!) *goes to swoon and read the next chapter*

I had meant to wait until the end of the story, but I just gotta say one thing. "WOO! HEERO!" Can I have him?

Oh wow... I love the use of Diamond Rio here. Not a huge country fan, but this song is on my playlist (as if it could ever NOT be!) One of the most beautiful and sad songs ever written!

::glomps the wonderfull author:: Thank you! You made my day with this ficcie! It was the funniest piece I've found in a while! ::giggles maniacly:: Sorry I've been up over 24 hours. But thank you! Angel and deamon stories always catch my funny for some reason. This is the second one with something like that that I fully enjoyed. Have a great day!

::rolls her eyes, grinning:: Why is it that your writing of God sounds a lot like me? No, wait, don't answer that! I'm not sure I really want to know. ::sighs:: ...Just a mortal lifespan until I can get back to my job... ::twitches, then salutes with a cheerful wink:: Brilliantly done, if slightly in need of an editor to catch the tiny blips that SpellChecker(tm) won't. Oh, this should amuse you. ::points to Kiran, who is holding a mop in one hand, a bucket in the other, and is dressed like a plumber::
Kiran: ~sighs~ I know I got off lightly in this...
::smirks:: Guess who'll be cleaning the bathroom? ::stands and stretches:: Cheers, Evie! ::waves and disappears in a flash of emerald flame::

A wonderfull Ending. The story was absolutly great. I love the happy end. And it wasn't too sweet, too. Your god has got a lot of humor, I like that.

But I wonder how Duo was able to reoganize the patients charts while lying shot and unconscious in bed.

You killed Heero? Shame on you. How could you do that. But Heero had style I must say.
It has been a while since you updated, will you send me a mail when you do?

You're just mean... MUST READ MORE!

that's a long chapter. I congragulate you!

woah...really really nice. Just finished fourth chapter. Very nice conclusion; can't wait to read more. Update soon!

(I can't believe you have so few reviews...it's an awesome story.)