A couple jarring modern refs not withstanding, this is a highly feasible account of Jack's first stay on the island.

this is well-written, amazing even. do you still get reviews for a story written 4 years ago??

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On another note: just wanted to add that this is one of the most in character Jack Sparrow stories I have ever read. I am so jealous! :) Wonderful job!!

It is always a pleasure to read a very good well written, detailed, vivid, in character "animated" story.
Awesome!

I know this was written some years back, but it seems the older or more far back they've bene written the better. The recent stories are just re runs of the classic old ones, only done worse.

Any way, lovely ficlet.

this is an absolutely marvelous story. as i'm sure someone has probably mentioned by now, you capture Jack's character splendidly. i could feel his frustration, i was completely wrapped up in the emotion of the story and you even made inanimate objects seem like characters. i wish i could write like you. keep it up

Oh Soap Puppy - this is simply fantastic.

Actually, check that, because there's nothing simple about it. You create Jack's character flawlessly without the use of speech and you mix a very real sense of desolation and danger of death in with some genuine laugh-out-loud moments (cursing the tree's offspring and questioning its ancestry ... i'm still wiping away tears).

Awesome. Wicked fantastic awesome.

A repetative, but fun story! You create a detailed, and very believable telling of his marooning tale! The minor actions you made Jack do were so like the creation of Mr. Depp. Luv'd it, luv. ^^

At first, I felt very sorry for poor Jack, but by the end, I was laughing.
You are a very good writer, I must say.

I have to say that this was very good. Liked the ketchup thing! *lol* that was funny! I could do without the F-bombs, but it's your story, and it wasn't so bad as some things that I have read and so this was very interesting!

good job with this; check out more of work. Have a nice day, savvy?

ta,

CAPTAIN Poppy Cotton

Peaches, angst, cabbages and rum... very intertesting assortment you have there. Bloody Hell though, that was hilarious! I could so picture Jack with the trees, and the rum, oh Hells Fire the rum! :D Poor Jack though, he kept on thudding into the trees. They didn;t seem to like him much did they, though mind you, he did carve large chunks out of them but that was mostly afterwards... LOL, great story! Bloody fantastic!

This is cool :D
You've captured Jack very well!
By the way, if you were still wondering, I make Jack's accent to be cockney mostly but more a mixture - which would make sense seeing as he travels such a lot.
Either that or a bad impression of an English accent LOL

holy crap, this story was amazing. the imagry was just unbelieveable. i could picture Jack's every emotion. his rage, his deep hate and his fury. i could even taste it. it was deep, poetic almost. i loved it and i hope you carry on with this, perhaps?
-kate

Interesting! You kept Jack in very good charecter! Excellent job!

This has to be one of my very favorite fics! It is both somber and humorous, and so Jack!

Hilarious. You're right: the bit about ketchup is just too priceless to leave out simply because it's not chronologically possible.