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| Kiskalla 2005-03-23 ch 2,  | abuse*swoons* I love your Schu. So twisted, sweet, and diabolical, all at once. Such a dark, and beautiful story; the way you wrote it works with the setting..so fragmented, yet still organized, just as Schu's mind is. I adore it. |
| kami 2005-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abusevery interesting... I love your characterizations and details about each of them... |
| Sweet Chaos 2005-01-23 ch 2, | abuseWow... Just...wow. |
| Mata 2004-12-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseAww..I like the aura of protectiveness Schuldig has for Nagi, it's really sweet. Enjoyable read, waiting for your stories is a treat! |
| Leokitsune 2004-06-17 ch 1, | abuseGod. Every time I read this story, I want to go back to every little thing I wrote and toil on it until it reaches the bar that you have raised. This is the fic that originally got me interested in Schuldig and his potential. The way you describe Schwarz is powerful and evocative. I read this and think about Schu surrounded by his little boxes and the complex personalities within them, the complex microcosm of Schwarz, and this image will keep me enthralled for hours. Thank you, thank you for writing this and sharing it with your readers. |
| Nalanzu 2003-09-20 ch 1, | abuseAs always, your writing leaves me... without words. This is a completely believable, totally in character and very convincing look into the mind of Schuldig and his conception of the rest of his team. IMHO, this goes above and beyond the intentions of the series to reach a whole new level. I look forward with great anticipation to the next thing you write. |
| HieiNimbus3007 2003-08-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was so DEEP! Please update! |
| ruismii 2003-08-02 ch 1, | abuseYou're back! And with another haunting story to boot... Paper Boxes is, indeed, very dark and disturbing. As always, you know how to dig deep and come out with these pyscological wonderfuls that the majority of us cannot even brush. And in Paper Boxes, the originality is a stunning, brutal realization! Yours is a step above all the other Shrwarz fics alike in character exploration. While other's repeat in complicating ways, this fic branches off into an area I did not know of, or did not know existed. I'd like to see this continued! I want to know what else could be said--is it going to POV chapters? And, I don't really quite understand the paper boxes--am I getting ahead of myself and will you clear it up later? Keep writing! |
| methodic madness 2003-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseOOh, I really liked this piece, and the insights into the characters that come with each box Schuldig holds. Through his musings and memories, you characterize both Schuldig and the other members of Schwarz so well that I think even if I hadn't seen the show before, I would have a decent idea of the characters. I also like the part about hate being what holds them together and makes them so strong. I noticed the end of this is labeled "End Part One" -- I really look forward to part two and more of your very talented writing! ^_^ MM |
| Cory 2003-07-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseEXTREMELY NEATO. i like your writing ish god stuff. continue please and i'll bake you cookies. |