I like how she keeps thinking of Angel in her last dying moments, it seems very fitting. He'll always be in her thoughts in some way.

*ME note* Thank GOD she wasn't thinking about Riley near the end *shudder*. Although...I wouldn't have minded it being Spike ;). Hehehehe! Very creepy, but nicely done. :):):):):):):)

Hehe...wow...I didn't know ppl wrote fanfics about Buffy the Vampire Slayer...I luv that show! Man, I should really start reading more of these...in other words, awesome job done, I was a bit scared what would happen to Buffy when you had the whole "Wake up!" thingy...*whew* don't scare ppl like that! _

Interesting concept, but I'd love to see it fleshed out.

Ick. Riley sucks ass. You need to work on your writing style, too.

okay, it's a little strange, but...

very good very inventive I would like too see more