That was okay...but it was also really good too so I want to say that you should have a sequel but until then you did good_

WHAT? he kisses her and it ends? no more?

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aw, man...can't we have a sequel or something? pleeze?

and no, this is not a flame.

I liked your story. Very romantic. ;)

see i told you i would, lol. This is a nice story. It's just a little harder to read. But keep up the good work.

Raven Ardour/Kia

i liked it.

hiya,

bwahahahahahahahaah you forgot hiei the cute fire koorime, how could you have forgotten hiei how *head in hands crying my eyes out* anewho yes well its cute and sweet, but how could he the cutest hottest FIRE koorime in the entire cosmos. oh well cute make a sequel.

inufox

That was so cute