Wow, this was good. And long, too! It's great to see an actual, full length story. Even though Etana took about five seconds to fall for Marco, and every third fanfic has Marco getting an alien girlfriend, a good story is a good story and this is great. When's the next part? I've gotta see it.

That was so good! And I am so serious when I say that. You definetely have to write more! I need to know what happens. Email me!

wow! it's a very good story. it's good from the very beginning to the end! BUT... where the heck is the NEXT part? you can leave me in suspence like this...! pls, write more, i beg you!

Oh. My. God. BRAVO!

Cool. Just...cool.

That's so sweet. Love it.

This is great. :) I really like Etana, but she and Marco fell for eachother a little quickly, however this is NOT cliched. Can't wait forthe sequel!

write more! MORE!

Yay! I finally finished! 88Kb and all! I LOVE IT! Incredible!

COOL! More ? That was great! :)

I liked it. It had a little cliched moments, but overall it was wonderful and beautifully written.

this is a great story I can't wait until the next chapter.