This is really good (as is all of your stuff.) I've read a lot of your pieces more than once...and you're a great writer.

I like this...

very good story!

MORE!I LIKE IT!1

WOW! This is GOOD! WRITE MORE! WRITE MOREEEEE!

Hey, weren't you like...a Hermione/Neville shipper? Wait, no, that was someone else, nevermind. Not saying that there was anything going on between H & H or anything, just sayin'...Anyways, I think you have undermined everything that JK Rowling ever tried to say on how much strength it takes to be poor. Good job. -)

:) Good! But where's the rest? You can't just end it there! POST MORE!

PWEASE, write a second.

HERMOINE AND RON!NO! Other than that, pretty good. I like your morbid stories. I read your Amy ones. Awesome. Any other books you've written about?

Very good! Though your summary gave too much away (you shouldn't've said it was Ron!), it was still an enjoyable read. The flashbacks were nicely placed and well written. The characters remained in character. Only things I can think of for you to work on are the points of view (can't switch from Harry to Hermione at the end there!) and you don't need to underline to thoughts if you already italicize them. Just the same, I really liked reading this and can't wait for the next part to come out!

That's sad. It was very well written though. It was just so sad.

powerful, write more

The story is great. Will you write a sequel or something?

Will there be a sequel? !

Omigosh! That was really good. Nice plot! I can see how the prolouge realtes to the story.

whaoh...that was deep, but good. it showed an different side of ron and harry.