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| Y. Seta 2005-06-15 ch 9, | abuseHi! I've added this story to Knight and Maiden: A Sobiwan archive and C2 community here in Hope you can join us there! :) |
| Ivy 2004-01-20 ch 10, anon. | abuseWhy did you repost chapter 1? Interesting, I can't wait for the dark side to start reaching for Obi Wan! |
| kyer 2004-01-19 ch 9, anon. | abuseI've made it to your latest chapter and am finding the story very intriguing. However, you might want to check on your 10th upload as it is a repeat of Chapter One. |
| Name1 2003-12-30 ch 8, | abuseupdate soon or I shall be forced to cry. Loudly and annoyingly. |
| Katie 2003-11-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseLOVE this story, glad to see it updated! Happy Thanksgiving and write more! |
| Wintersong 2003-11-26 ch 7, anon. | abuseThis is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter! What did the Sith do to Obi-Wan? He was a Sith right? |
| Obi-Wan'sPadawan 2003-10-21 ch 6, | abuseUh oh...better go help him. Good chapter. Too late to write details now, but you know how it goes. ~Obi-Wan'sPadawan |
| Name1 2003-10-16 ch 6, | abuseAnd now for your rather gay review: Keep those chapters rolling, keep those chapters rolling, roll on! Write up, write on! Keep it going! Clears throat. That's all for this time. Update soon K? |
| saiyuki123 2003-10-14 ch 6, | abuseThis is a very good story. Can't wait to see what happens next. |
| Melissa Jooty 2003-09-17 ch 5, | abuseWhat a brilliant story! I've read a few dealing with what might have happened if Qui hadn't taken on Obi and yours is up there with the best. I love how you've sort of wound in the events of TPM without bratty Anakin to deal with. The older, jaded Obi is so well portrayed. I can't wait to see what he's been up to in those six years and how he's so well trained. |
| Obi-Wan'sPadawan 2003-08-28 ch 5, | abuseStill going good. LIke the interaction between Sabe and OBi-Wan, how they've both been hurt by 'parental figures.' Keep it up. It's on my alert, so I'll be waiting for another chapter. ~Obi-Wan'sPadawan |
| Foxy 2003-08-22 ch 4, anon. | abuseWonderful story, just finish it, K?^^ |
| jedijane 2003-08-21 ch 4, anon. | abuseOne of the more interesting stories I've read. I await with baited breath for the rest of the chapters. |
| NightGoddess 2003-08-20 ch 4, | abuseThis is great. I love the attitude you gave obi-wan. |
| Obi-Wan'sPadawan 2003-08-20 ch 4, | abuseYOu know what, I'm really liking this story. This usually isn't the kind of story I usually read, but I believe it is very well written. It also depicts a very original way for OBi-Wan to feel after seeing Qui-Gon again. |