Awesome fic. I like how you slowly made Dorathy show more expression.please update soon!

Hahah...hope this helps the review limit that you imposed, so that you could actually write an update to this unusual, but tasteful and touching fanfic that you have composed. I would love to see more installments. I would love to watch how dorothy develops more human qualities as time goes on...and I would love to see what happens if she COULD actually get to the point where she could cry..or the fun expirement of trying to please gwen and try to swim for once.

Heh, if Roger acts like her(gwen's) father, than it seems that dorothy has become a subsitite mother..or sister.

"Elizabeth Shaoblane- My ultimate plan is to get people kicked out of libraries everywhere! No j/k, but that’s cool, not you almost getting kicked out but that you laughed so hard J It makes me happy. I wonder which she does prefer…"

Oh blegh! X_X

I don't think it would matter. I steam up the room every morning and people hate it. Maybe you could use that.

Great plan! Great game! Great execution! And this one scores my faves list! _

The kitty thing was completely unexpected, but written in expertly. It was cute!

I often get Norman to egg Roger on a bit in this RP I did at w.paradigm-city.com. The roleplay crashed, but it was great while it lasted. Lemme know if you need any jokes. ;)

Well, terrific! Faves list and I'll be checking up monthly.

Love from,

Elizabeth Shaoblane

Oh, cuteness! I could see Norman smiling after Gwyn kissed his cheek. And a kitty! *sniff* I like the name, Nox. Very cool!

Aww, what a sweet story! You're very good with description. Maybe the reason Dorothy 'smiled' was to try and ACT more human in front of Gwyn? Hmm. The part about Gwyn and the swimming lessons was done very nicely. Poor Dorothy...

Very good. But do you really need all that white space? and Norman's last name is Burg. I think his name is funny. Norman Burg. Norman Burg. lol. ok.

Please update soon. I love this anime.

::Dries tears:: That was beautiful! You have a true talent for story development. The way you told this story flowed beautifully, and I felt that you stayed very true to the characters. Great job! WRITE MORE!

*Tori*

I am enjoying this story very much. It is smoothly and cleverly written, and the plot is intreguing.

Hm. Gwyn is living in Roger's house and seems to have the run of the place. How long will it be before she stumbles onto Big O's hangar? And how will she react to seeing The Megadeus(the common folk don't know Big O's name) which always shows up to trash the giant robots that always wind up showing up, inside her uncle's house?

yay yay yay! you put another chapter! can't wait for the next! hm...a cat. never expected that.

yay yay yay! you put another chapter! can't wait for the next! hm...a cat. never expected that.

OH! I LOVE! I LOVE MUCHU! Gywn's cool (worship worthy, even) She sounds so pretty, too. I loe how you've made Roger her father/person/thing in this.

AW! KITTENS! Dorothy and I have one thing in common- we love kitties! O_O *hugs her cats Mint and Cheyenne*

You gotta write more because this story rawks.

Rocker Baby ("Life is but a dream.")

Aw that was so cute! I love Gwyn's gift, I just saw some kittens at the oet store and I want one now! But I already have two cats. *pout* Anyway, great story! Can't wait for the Roger/Dorothy fun!

I'm jumping on this bandwagon and saying fabulous story. I too am obsessed with Big O and I think this has dome great writing and well thought out plot. Really captured my attention.