 LesserKnown 2005-03-11 . chapter 1Great! I knew that metaphor was in trouble.
Really funny, but very sweet all at once. Kudos! |
 Summersfan 2004-05-25 . chapter 1Okay, after I read your "pregnant-Xander" fic I really thought you couldn't get any better. I was wrong, obviously. Dead wrong. Stupidly wrong.
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I nearly split my gut laughing at this one. It's terrific. "Just curious." |
 airaloki 2003-09-23 . chapter 1funny! extremely funny! :D loved those last lines about buffy wrecking angels tv screen. :D and spikes 'epiphany'. LOL |
 Vesica 2003-08-05 . chapter 1Thought I would spread the feedback around. Wonderful! Clever dialogue, great pacing and, again, excellent punctuation. My inner reading voice thanks you!
I am very intrigued by the plank/pipe/ever morphing object. An author's whim or a hint of the nefarious plan of the next Big Evil? *wink* |
 Nicole 2003-08-03 . chapter 1 Bahaha! Absolutely brilliant. I'm so glad I found this. |