Poor Marik. He seems... childish, here. Very confused, very naive. But this is good.

...the end of battle city huh...hehe ... can't remember who's the hikari and yami in this case.. is it marik the yami and malik the hikari or is it vice versa.

Oh, that was so fluffy and sweet. You don't often find fics from Marik's POV. I think this showcased him well - wihtout making a psychotic, deranged idiot.

Wow, that was a really good fic _ Keep on writing!

Aw...

That was great. Wonderful job on making Marik all confused!

"My light!You found me!"? Well, it's very mushy, but I like it. That's very high praise, coming from me, cause I really dislike Marik.

That was so touching... Your writing is so captivating and beautiful... I feel so sad for Marik...

***trueyamigirlfriend

Wow . . . that's really beautiful!

Unfortunately, I haven't seen much of Yu-Gi-Oh, so I probably missed a lot of details in this piece, but I still enjoyed it very much.

I know that I've told you before, but you have a wonderful talent for writing.

Never stop!

*claps*

This extremely nice, you captured the feeling of being "lost" nicely and the descriptive words flows just right.

Kudos to you, this goes into my fave list. _