Really nice story! I like the weird transformation part [with the wings and such]. It reminds me of Vincent from Final Fantasy 7... I love this story! I can't wait until Squall comes in. Update soon! Please?? xD

wow, i really like this story.u should continue!

wow! really good story! glad i came across it! hope to read more! yup yup~~!

*peace*

Aww, that's so sweet!! Love the development of Laguna and Raine's relationship...Good luck with school!! ;)

Very detailed and plotted out story...touching too... I think I'm hooked on this story already. Anyways, keep up the good writing because you have a very nice story going! ~_^

I hope more people review- i can't wait for more chapters. your writing is very good, the grammer and non rushing is wonderful. Please write more!

grammaitical errors this time (not as much, which is an improvement). since Ellone's father died, Raine would be saying "your father would've been proud", rahter "will be proud". "will" is more present/future tense, whereas "would" is the past tense.

cool!

grammaitical errors this time (not as much, which is an improvement). since Ellone's father died, Raine would be saying "your father would've been proud", rahter "will be proud". "will" is more present/future tense, whereas "would" is the past tense.

cool!

not trying to be real nitpicky but wouldn't "hands formed into claws" be a bit better? sorry. it's just that this is one excellent sci-fi FF8 fic i've read so far that i couldn't help myself. save the title sounding a bit like something more suited for Sephiroth from FF7, no offense. ;p

er- strange... well it was very detailed and I hope you update soon. :)

Lol!! It was kinda funny imagining Laguna go into Dante mode hehe!! Great first chappy and it's nice to see good ol' dorky Laguna again!! ;)