Reviews for Haunting Secrets

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sexy she-devil 2004-12-14 ch 9,	abuseOMG! so cool. i liv this story! plz continue! oh, and i would like to register my sadness at the fact that harry might have been lupins son. and that lily liked Remus more sob
Esther 2004-02-15 ch 9, anon.	abusewondeful!
CarEtoDreaM 2004-01-27 ch 1,	abuseinteresting, off to read other chaps now
Peter'sGirl 2004-01-02 ch 9,	abuseur story was great and i can't wait for the seguel but i hope she stayes with Draco and growes to love and that good stuff but anyways yuor story is wonderfull can't wait fot sounds of a breaking heart.
ShortStuff10 2003-08-22 ch 9,	abuseI like it. Im going to read the sequel!
willowrain 2003-08-18 ch 4,	abuseThis chapter is great but it's so sad. I'm dreading my graduation now and leaving everthing I know. This is a very pointless review but I had to whine about school a little in this chap.
lifes-mysteries18 2003-08-17 ch 9,	abusenice story! read the second and third one asap!
Lovely White 2003-08-09 ch 9,	abuseTHe wedding was kind of fast... but really dreadful.. *sniff. Poor Hermione. Being forced to marry. Now that i think about it though, it's kind of a not-so-Hermione-kinda-thing-to-do. And also, if she got the diary of Lily from Harry. wouldn't that mean that Harry read them too? Or did I miss something? ANyways. THank you for a great fic. Please update the next soon.
Dark Veritas 2003-08-08 ch 9,	abusewell that was a dumb ending. come on! i need a sequel. lol.
Wiggidy Wack 2003-08-08 ch 9,	abusewow, that was sad...oh well! i liked it anyways though i love draco/hermione fics:) hehe, why do you think i wrote all my stories based on Hermione and Draco romances
Dark Veritas 2003-08-08 ch 2,	abuseoh nice...i really love it update soon!
chibi playing with fire 2003-08-08 ch 9,	abusethats so sad but is hermione going to end up loving draco or is she going to end up like lilly
Ecavi 2003-08-08 ch 9,	abuseThis was an awesome story! I can't wait to find out how this all goes in the sequel.
katie 2003-08-08 ch 9, anon.	abusei loved this story and i am going to read the squel right now!
liar 2003-08-08 ch 9,	abuseHey there, that is a beautiful story. I just don't know whether it is a good idea to start a sequel. Why don't you simply go on with this one? A sequel needs something more intriguing than just being the next chapter or something. Anyway, it was very well written, sometimes there were rather annoying spelling mistakes, but if you have a beta for the Sequel that shouldn't be a problem anymore. You focused on Hermione, maybe that's the reason why Harry and Ron seem a little OOC, but well, it doesn't hurt. And by the way, why didn't Lucius intercept Hedwig? He got hold of any other owl. Hm. Draco was nicely portrait, different from school and that's a good thing. But you could have been more detailed about his relationship with Hermione. The plot idea is okay, it was just a little strange that Hermione and Draco both agreed to the wedding after some time. Why? Hermine (and Draco) could have been stubborn and refused, after all, Hermione's dad didn't like the idea either. Maybe you should add another chapter in which you explain that... You really do have talent, no doubt about that, but maybe you should get yourself a beta-reader and discuss some hapters with them first. Might come in hand. Keep up the good work and update soon. :)

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