Very good. i will keep reading!

Great story, Alan's powers make the story interesting and the weakness of the others balance it all out. I hope you continue the series with other amazing stories.

SWET! I L-O-V-E IT! One Question though. Whats with the big spaces at the end of the chapters? :'

Hey great story! I'm glad you decided to change the ending though. There is FAR too much potential in Becca having the virus now to just throw it away. Imagine the fights that could result if she starts to manifest some more abilities like Wesker and Alan.

a little to happy, but there was good immagery and sintax, i give it a c+

Ariel Apple: Holy Crapoly, we're up two oclock in the morning reading this story and we finally finished. Damn, that was long but so worth it.

Chantay: "“ How’s Rebecca doing? ” A mocking voice that is definitely not Sherry’s purrs from the other end, “ Let me guess, dead? Muwahahahahahahahahahahah! ”" I dont know, I found that part terrible funny.

Ariel Apple: Sick humor. Well, actually, anything that deals with Wesker's laugh makes me laugh.

Chantay: And you're right! Alfred is a fruitcake!

Ariel Apple: A deliscious fruitcake.

Chantay: And Ash is the hottest creature ever imagined. But sum stuff in ur story--

Ariel Apple: Or novel. We've been reading this for a month!

Chantay: As I was saying...sum stuff in ur story threw me off. Like Thomas. It's so far fetched, Wesker and Redfeild related? Woah! Where did that come from? I really want to find sum scissors and cut him out completely.

Ariel Apple: And I'm gonna borrow those scissors and cut Enrico out. The ghost threw me off, too.

Chantay: Alexia's temper tantrum was so awsum. She's so hot when she's angry. And your alternate ending should be the actual ending. It's nice to see characters dying.

Ariel Apple: Down with Barry!

Chantay: Hey, Barry was cool.

Ariel Apple: He was only cool because he was so awkward but hilarious during the game. ((Jill sandwich!))

Chantay: M, Jill.

Ariel: Okay, we're getting off topic so sign off?

Chantay: Sign off. Bye!

Whats wrong with Atlanta?, if there is a place you need to be worried about it New York at night with money in full view

hi, i love this story, it has a lot of detail, but not to much detail to make it boring.

You are alos one of my favorite authers and when i finally get to writing my own sotry, i will dedicate a few chapters to you.

Who names their kid Spade? I mean I know it's wesker and he's... well wesker but naming your child Spade is just cruel. Anyways good story so far I like your characterization of Claire.

wow i kinda like this ending better,

maybe its just me

but its good i like it,

keep it up

~virus~

i remember hearing from somewhere that weskers virus was the T-2 virus. it might have been weskers report but it's definently the T-2 virus

LOL! I am now going to be plagued by pictures of Wesker running away from Grannies! LMAO! I'm getting such a red riding-hood picture going on here, like Wesker's a wolf in a red coat and this granny is chasing after him... *ahem*

Aw, it's so sad! Like you really feel for Alan, seeing as he's got this big guilt feeling going on. Although, I never really did picture Wesker giving an evil laugh over the phone, lol, that's pretty scary!

A sadder ending, but it did explain if Rebecca would get any bad effects from the T-2. You could possibly tie this in somehow (alternate dimensions, possibly) with Curse of Veronica. I'll get my next chapter posted by the end of the week. Best of luck fixing your account.

Jeez! This thing has more twists and turns than my colon! Keep it up!

You know what - this ending is almost better than the true ending. At least that's what I think. ^^

"That is, he laughed up until the grandma happened to catch sight of him. Now that was funny!"

Oh, I love that part. :)