Allo. ^_^ Have you given up on this story? I hope not. I have an idea... Why doesn't Remus go through the veil in the Department of Mysteries? He gets to join Sirius that way! Or he can even bring Sirius back...

I don't usually go for Potter fics, but damn, I like this.

aww, poor Remus! you're so cruel...
I really like that poltergeist-part, it makes perfect sense! good thinking!
and snape that no one ever listens, that was funny!
I'm really dying to find out what the plan is and how things aregoing to be, so update soon! plese?

too short. make it longer next time, ok? maybe you should expand teh hospital scene, remus goes to alot of trouble to get there and then "hi, we're better now lets go home" just a suggestion and dumbledore is never mean, he rules *beams*

glad lupin is happy[ish] again/ longer, k?

This chapter was a bit slower than the others so not as exciting. There could have been a little more description methinks, but I'm still eager to see what the plan is.


Thanks for the notes.

That's so horrible for poor Remus. He'll be so guilty when he realises what he's done... or will he?

Brilliant as always.


Jeez. they're going to have trouble containing a ghost.


Continue PLEASE!

firstly: barnum! are you american? if so he is a...kind of important part of your history. a con man who ran a circus and could get you to believe anything. what it is, is a play...or a musical rather which my school performed last term. one of the songs was called "love makes such fools of us all." [incidentally, my solo]

but anyway back to your story. great idea with the poltergeist. v good idea. poor old remus things just CANNOT GET ANY WORSE. i say this every chapter, i'm aware of that, but i think you've realyl topped it this time.
stupid harry is climbing his way back up in my bad books for moaning about sirius. liked the rest, didn't so much like that bit [although i loved snape's reaction. he rocks] i dunno why, it just seems a little... stilted for a declaration of love really. you could do it better judging from the wonderfulness of the rest.
also the bit about harry and supporting homosexuality is a good concept but a bit confusing. is lupin asking him this now? is that harry's reply or lupin guessing what harry's reply will be?
anyway v good. keep emailing me.

Brilliant, this story keeps on getting better and better. It seems just like Tonks to trip over something and set the whole household into uproar.



I simply do not know how you can write angst after reading Douglas Adams. Its just so funny... brilliant story.



Thanks for telling me you were updating. Please, could you do the same thing next time.



Much obliged.



Anna.

v good. thanks for reviewing mine and for sending me a nice "hey come and review my story again!!" email coz i am enjoying it despite the fact that i really cannot imagine how it could get any worse for lupin let alone better.
ignoring his eternal misery really liking it especially, i have to say, the writing style. douglas adams v good and yer, it is coming off kinda like that in a mega depressing way ;) anyway keep emailing me about it and hmm... well i'm nto sure i do like the title actually but i suspect this to be because it reminds me of barnum. not good.

I like it. Yeah. I do. PLease updaate sioon tbsxnx. sory i'm sshaaking

what?!

no. they'll never be together, that's not happy on even a miserable "well after death anyway..."
agh.

well written but still, very very miserable. the most distressing [well actually that's not true, neville killing harry and then himself] fic i've read.

Hurrah for the highly ironic angst/romance fics where you rampantly kill your characters!



Very dark and morbid, just the way I like them on a bright and cheerful saturday morning.


My thanks. That was a very enjoyable read. Are you going to continue? I guess so seeing as its called chapter 1.


I hope so.