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stepintothemoonlight16
2008-12-24 . chapter 9
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update!
Portmsans girl
2005-11-28 . chapter 9
This story is funny!
I love Julie and Portman together thay are so cutr. I am addicted to their coupling!
Please put some major Portman/julie in there
just for me? (does puppy eyes)
Please update soon
luv ya xoxoxoxo
future cop
2005-09-01 . chapter 9
i read the first one and it was hilarious i dident think you could do better but you did, this is one hundred times better i love it
duckys
2005-06-30 . chapter 9
oh no, it cant just stop there!
Imp17
2004-06-29 . chapter 9
More please. PLease, please, please with cherries ad cream (or should that be mayple syrup and butter) on top.
Happy Writing!
DigitalAngel4U
2004-06-21 . chapter 4
Sorry if my last review was messed up b/c my computer just sent it without my consent! And if you do watch Newsies look for Spot(Gabe Damon's character.) the whole movies adorable! So just wanted to clear up why there might be some mistakes in my last review! Bye!
DigitalAngel4U
2004-06-21 . chapter 3
This along with it's prequel os ** hilarious! And don't worry, I'm from Texas (not originally)and I thought it was funny. Even if Austin is the only non hickish place lol! It's funny and I like it! Plus I was reading your shout outs and you really should see newsies it's very good. I love the kangeroo and how enthuastic your writing is! Keep up the good work!
C-chan96
2004-05-25 . chapter 1
Gosh, I forgot how much I missed this...I'm sorry that I didn't review before (I don't think...o.O...I don't actually remember...), but I decided to now. I have truly learned that I should review when I read something. ^_^
Kristine, this was hilarious. I have truly forgotten its greatness. Lol...I forgot how much Averman and Potch make me smile, how cruel you sometimes are to my Charlie, and how you made Adam turned on by pancakes. Bless you, Kristine. Bless you. Lol...
"At 5’11, with gold-brown hair, blue eyes, broad shoulders, strong arms, and slightly darkened skin…well, Connie and Julie were now drooling like Adam, except butter had nothing to do with it."
That cracked me up! ^_^ Hee hee...hee hee...
The thing with Guy and Connie's pancake fight over 'chocolate chip or blueberry' was great too...*laughs and sighs* Ahh...I needed this. I really did.
"Connie and Guy continued on their chocolate chip vs. blueberries kick, which Charlie found annoying. How many different times could you say blueberries were fruity and chocolate chips were chocolatey anyway?"
Ahh...hee hee. I liked that too. Lol...If you haven't noticed, I quote occasionally. I can't help it; I think it's a disease or something. ^_^ I'm a bit obsessive.
*squeals* What's Adam gonna do? Lol...Wow, I've missed ACTUAL Duck humor around here...Good to see this updated again. Gosh, I'm still laughing. You, Kristine, are a funny person. Lol...I'm going to go giggle in my corner and PRETEND I'm studying for finals. Hee hee.
Love, crackers, and rock-n-roll!
*C-chan*
-Spread the Duck Love-
Pure-Pen
2004-05-24 . chapter 9
I JUST read both A Mid-Summer's Night Dinner and this story and I just have to say you are brillant. I just had the worst day (I was banished to French Project HELL) and I got bored and read these and they both were awesome. There aren't too many good, actually funny Duck Fictions and these two kick some major **. Between Adam and his fetishes with Breakfast condiments and Averman and his obsessions with Vampires, and kangaroos, its Gold and I'm going to be watching for more of your stories. Awesome Job!
rubix the cube
2004-05-24 . chapter 9
can't leave a long review...about to head to school..finals week but just telling you that i'm glad that you updated...I thought that you abandoned this fic but i'm glad you returned... but i was rather horrofied about the butter thing... but it's Adam what can you expect. And Averman made me giggle. Poor Chloe. and the cliff-hanger (grumbles) just make sure that you update soon m'kay? ~love Allie
Francois Noir
2004-05-23 . chapter 9
OH MY GOD! Fantastic. First off, though I say this in EVERY review, let me tell you: I LOVE POTCH! He is indeed quite awesome, and I love him dearly. "Are you calling me fat?" he wailed, throwing himself onto the sidewalk and sobbing into Potch. "How could you do this to me? When you *know* I'm sensitive?" HAHAHA! The whole fat thing was glorious indeed. Averman had me giggling through the whole chapter. And Potch with the onion allergy! Ha! It's too funny. Kristine, oh Lord, this was hilarious. But now what?! BANKS! I'm not sure if I even want to KNOW what's going to happen, only I totally do, because I know it's going to be great, because you're the best. Ah! I always forget how much I love this story because it takes you ages to update, but it's okay, because then you end up with squealing fangirl-ish reviews like this from me. Heh. SO UPDATE SOON! I must know - even though I'm frightened to - what happens next! The horrors of a horny Banksie scare me beyond words, but I won't rest until I know. KRISTINE, YOU ROCK MY STOOB!
iluvguygermaine00 aKa Samantha
2004-02-08 . chapter 8
Wow, I haven't reviewed in forever! I'm very soory. I love this story! I can't believe I didn't review you sooner to tell you. This story, it so funny. I could read it 100 times and it would still crack me up. Kristine, you are a true genius! I can't wait until you update! Love ya!Samantha
do not email me
2004-01-25 . chapter 8
Where the hell have you been, you havent updated this in so long i thought yoou'd frgot about it. Good chapter Potch Jr has missed you. Post again soon Love, Emily
Quimby
2004-01-24 . chapter 8
HAHAHA! I vote for Goldberg. He deserves the title of the Non-** Authority Master. And hooray for them almost being at the IHOP! That rocks. I can't wait for the next chapter...if and when it ever comes! And I hate that you make me like Adam Banks because he's such a weirdo with a maple syrup fetish. (Except for the part where I love you for it.) Rock on, Kristine. =Q=
BanksPortmanMendozaWu
2004-01-24 . chapter 8
I like this story. This morning i have read this fic and also the one about dinner, both are really funny. I find it a little disturbing, but very funny, that Adam seems to be getting off on pancakes. but i love this, and even though they have made it to the IHOP, i dont think that it will be easy for them to have food. I hope that Adam does his little butter dance thing soon, because it will be rather funny to read about.
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