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18 months later, I come back to this story only to see I've not submitted a review for the last chapter (not that you don't have enough). Finally back into ffn and writing, although I'm only revising my stories for now. Going through all the stories I've read to get some inspiration and ideas. Didn't realize until now how much I've missed reading, and writing. Must make up for that.

I am melting right now -. I loved this fic so much. You have a marvelous way to tell a story, your style is fluid and easy to read and the situations are totally believable. I love the way you explore Joe and Francoises feelings for each other and how you describe their reactions at seing the beloved one in danger. All your characters are very IC. but you know? I really was getting desesperated every time a fluff moment was interrupted hah hah. - but thanks for giving it to us at the end. YOu are excellent!

Don't get me wrong, it's a great story and you are a good writer. But I'm having trouble reading because of all the vivid descriptions, getting confused. Oh, and a small tip, 009's eyes aren't golden brown, they're red.

I think I'm going to cry. Seriously. That was such a strong, sweet, powerful ending! GA2, you have told me that I'm the "Queen of Suspense," but without a doubt, you are the Queen of Romance. I've never read any other stories by anyone else that have the same true romantic feel as yours do. I can only hope that your own anime will envelope and use all of your romantic and story-shaping talents that you possess. Who knows, maybe we'll be watching YOUR anime on Cartoon Network in the next few years :-) RL2

Great job. And it was a very sweet and emotional scene with Joe admitting his love to Francoise. Also, I love that you use Japanese terms of endearment. It makes it seem more real. I'm sorry that this story is drawing to a close! RL2

Did he do what I think he did? Turn 003 into one of his minions? That dirt bag! Well, 009 won't stand for that, I'm sure. This is a great story. I can totally see it being used as an ep for the anime. By the way, I see in your bio you're working on your own anime. That is tremendous! And with your writing ability, I'm sure that you will be able to sell it, too. RL2

Another heart-stopping chapter. Poor Joe! I doubt that he will lose, but he will be injured, no doubt. Thanks be to Dr. Gilmore for that new device! I have a quick question for you. How do you get your italics and bolds to transfer into ff.net? I tried using a different style of letters (arial) but it still didn't work. I'm stuck writing everything normally, which isn't always what I want. If you could email me about how you do it, that would be wonderful :-) RL2

I just loved that episode where 009 saves 003 from 0010. It was great. And so was this chapter. I thought 004 was exceptionally sweet going to talk to Joe about what was happening. And it continues to be a haunting problem to Joe...can he truly love someone since he is a machine now? Granted, his humanity is still there somewhat, but he obviously doesn't know quite what to think. I can't wait to see how he rescues 003. And it was nice that at least he knows she's thinking of him, even in her state of peril. RL2

Wow, talk about excitement! Is this a new type of cyborg that can appear and disappear in a flash? And poor Joe...she's here one minute, and gone the next second. The concern all the cyborgs show for Francoise is sweet. I love the style you write with; yours is full of compassion and care for your characters, and you show such a wide and exquisite range of emotions! You really should try a Voltron story. I think you would do an incredible amount of justice to it! RL2

Totally loved this chapter. It was so cute, the way 009 came in to her room. He just has such a shy boyishness to him that is really very appealing. And the way he hollered at 007 was great. He's protective of 003 at all times, and you show that so well. I'm so glad I saw the marathon so I better understand your cyborg stories. Well, off to the next chapter! RL2

Wonderful, just wonderful. The way you wrote the beach scenes, both day and night, is fantastic. And the heartfelt emotions of both 009 and 003 is great. You can feel Joe's pain at wondering how it would be to kiss someone again; would he feel it? How would she react? I have the feeling I'm going to love this story, just as I do ALL of yours! RL2

BabyG: THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! *makes a standing ovation*
Lisa: Gosh, I know what they said in their own words. That was amazing! I LOVED THIS!
Jet: You gals are too emotional.
Lisa: Seems like you're not. No wonder no girl ever fall for you.
Jet: -.-

This was a long story but it was worth reading. You got a really. .what's that word for WAY great? Talent. Hope you write more stories to come.

great fic

g2g but you did awesomely!