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RozenMaiden14
2008-04-26
ch 9,
abuseUpdate? Have you dissapeared to nowhere? it's been 4 months! And this is a ver ynice story. Please update soon.
shadowyfire
2007-05-30
ch 9,
abuse^-^ your writing's great!! the story's growing with everlasting suspense, huh? i bet it might be a bit hard to think of what would happen next...well, good luck on your next one!
Lady Azar de Tameran
2006-02-22
ch 9,
abuseNicely done. I truly enjoyed reading this and hope that you choose to continue. Haru/Saki is a pairing that is somewhat unusual, but now that I think about it, I do believe that it works very nicely. She seems to be the type to accept him regardless of his blackside and the Sohma curse. To this, I like how you have characterized them; they feel almost exactly as they do in the magna. Bravo!

Azar
CrazyGirlofManyNames
2006-02-18
ch 9,
abuseI like this so far. Who is Uo-chan going to paried up with? I would like her with Yuki, of course after he finds out about Kyou and Tohru...
T. R. Delacor
2005-12-01
ch 1,
abuseHiyah! ^_^

I run the official Hatsuharu x Hanajima fanlisting, and someone recommended that I link to this fanfiction. I read through it, and honestly it's one of my few favorites. I'll give you a better review when I read the rest of it, but the story -is- looking good so far.

I also noticed that you reviewed my (inmyopinion, somewhat crappy) story Let the Rain Fall. Thank you for taking time to do that ^_^ hehe, at the time, you said, "there aren't many good haruxhana fics... hm maybe I should write one..." Just wanted to let you know that I'm glad you decided to write one after all.

And I do have the link to this story up on my site, ( ), so if you want to check it out go ahead, or if you want me to remove the link, feel free to let me know.

good luck with your writing in the future ^_^
waaaay 2 lazy 2 sign in
2005-11-14
ch 6, anon.
abuseAck! *Hash been hugglesquished*. I've been reading this story for a while, but I forgot to put it on alert, so I kinda *cough, cough* haven't read it since the *cough, cough.* fourth chapter. SORRY!.!.! Lurve t3h stoy, tho...
Nephthy-san
2005-05-14
ch 9,
abuseThis fic is excellent. I love the way haru and saki interact. I also loved how you paced yourself with the romance. I really hope you update soon because this is a beautiful piece of work.
ri-chan05
2005-04-05
ch 9,
abuseI really liked this one. It's the first I've read about Hana (from her POV)PLZ keep writing.
RequiemElise
2005-03-24
ch 9,
abuseyayy! I'm so hapy you updated! finally! I think this chapter is great! please update SOON, you left me hanging there for awhile.^-^
thanks,
RequiemElise
Akkitora
2005-03-14
ch 9,
abuseOh, I love this fic! It's so emotional and deep. I throughly enjoy reading it. Please update!
Pebbled Sky
2005-03-14
ch 9,
abuseI can't BELIEVE I didn't review this yesterday, because I swear I did. Hmm. Oh well, better late then never I suppose.

Even if I sound like a clone of so many other reviewers, I have to say that you rock. I love your story to bits, and it tickles me neon pink to see that little "new chapter alert" email in my box. Don't worry about your writing- you're doing a splendid, sparkly diamondy job. Platinum record quality, babeh! ^_^

I'm glad that you like my stories so much. It's always nice to read reviews from repeat readers. Anyway, if you find yourself in a bit of a spot with any of your pieces (it happens to everyone, none of us are virgins to the thing) then have no fear. I am a patient reader, and I shall stand by your side until the internet collapses upon itself or... something.

>XD

{Pebbles}

PS: A+ WOULD READ AGAIN!
Skittles1
2005-03-13
ch 9,
abuseI really liked it!! Please keep updating, it is all so wonderful!
ellina HOPE
2005-03-13
ch 9,
abuseLol lol lol... I jus finished reading up to chapter 8 about an hour or so ago, and added this to my faves. So, I went off to do stuff and mourn about how it'd be forever until I got to read chapter 9. Then, I got back on and checked my fanfic account. Lo and behold: AN UPDATE!

Ha, I love this fic. It's such a unqiue coupling, for one, and I love how EMO Saki-chan is. ^^

love:e.
Elandru
2005-03-04
ch 8, anon.
abuseyou must update.. (zombie-state)
ugghh...
rayearth_luvr
2005-02-21
ch 8, anon.
abuseomg, write more! this is such a good story!! listen to me!!
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