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| Jazi 2005-06-12 ch 1,  | abuseWow... Aw, this story makes me want to hug someone. it's so sweet! |
| Ashfowl 2005-06-01 ch 1, | abuseit's cute plese write more. |
| Identity99 2004-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, Sorry, I'm not signed in, but the site said the process took too long and wouldn't let me... {mumble}... GREAT! The part of Artemis when he learned of his fathers death was TERRIFIC! I LOVED the flashbacks and you portrayed Artemis very, very well. Good Job!! Your fellow writer, Identity99 |
| DemonOfShadow 2004-03-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was such a touching story. You should keep writing stories like that. |
| Hope 2004-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's a great story with much attention to detail. At the end I was truly crying due to the emotions described... It's one of the best Artemis Fowl stories I've ever read. |
| Ever 2003-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my god, ,masterfully written. Maybe a little longer next time...? One of the best ever. Congratulations. You should feel proud. |
| The CheezHead 2003-08-30 ch 1, | abuseWOW!Really good!You captured the relationship between Butler and Artemis beautifully. |
| Christul 2003-08-18 ch 1, | abuseYES! I've been looking for a fic about Butler and Artemis forever! I loved this one and I hope people will write more about Butler and Artemis's relationship. (If anyone knows of any, please email me at christul@animail.net) I really loved the way you did the flashbacks, and my only regret about this story is that it wasn't longer. |
| ArtyFowl05 2003-08-17 ch 1, | abuseoh wow,that really touching ang beautifull! |
| Dorian's Painter 2003-08-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was so good! Keep writing about Butler and Artemis. It's my favorite aspect of the series. I love the stories with the touching scenes like that! |
| BigGreenMonkey 2003-08-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was awesome. I love Butler/Artemis stories. |
| Anacalagon 2003-08-05 ch 1, | abusewow... o.O wow... i am touched. this was priceless |
| Flame Fairy1 2003-08-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was a *very* touching story. The flashbacks to the crucial moments in Artemis' life were (for this fandom, anyways) believable and realistic. Especially the one where Artemis finds the news about the Fowl Star - I've always wondered how that would be portrayed. I think you've written it perfectly =D It shows that (at that time) Artemis is still a child and still feels emotion when it comes to his parents and Butler as well. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. ^_^ |
| OceanChild 2003-08-04 ch 1, | abuse*applauds* |
| scarletswitchblade 2003-08-04 ch 1, | abusewell done. the initial dialogue between butler and his uncle wasn't as good as the rest of it but it was still magnificent. i have a question thoiugh. are all your characters going to express tremendous guilt and sorrow? even though the way you wrote artemis is distant in Borowed time and emotional at the same time. how exactly is someone distant and emotional at the same time? |