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| TheSpinster 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI think its great, but umm...Knuckles eyes are violet and Amys eyes are apple look at them in the show and you will see or in the gamee and you will see... |
| Alex Warlorn 2003-08-21 ch 1, | abuseTransformation, cloning, these stories have one thing in common, the definition of the soul. I can tell from your writings it's very important to you. Can I have a preview of the next part of Digimon -Destine? |
| Kalming Waters 2003-08-02 ch 1, | abuseA pretty good read. There were some things that seemed odd, like the colors you used for Knuckles' and Amy's eyes. I mean, I never saw Knuckles' eyes ever being brown or Amy's eyes violet. Other than that and some other details, it was a strong story for something you wrote for the first time. Hope you have some other stuff to post. |