omg! this story was so kickass! please u must finish it!!

I really liked it, altough the last couple chapters were kinda slow. But, is it really over? You kinda left us hanging there. And I know u r still out there cuz I watch u on deviant art. Yes, I am waterbendingkuniochi. Plz, don't leave this. Yes Naraku is dead, but doesn't Shippo, and Inu maybe, need to get back to Japan. Please, if u leave it like this, thats just cruel.

i love this story but where is the NC-17 verson?

Please update! Please update! PLEASE UPDATE! I need to continue to read this i am addicted to it. pweas upwate for me

Intruguing first chapter. I like that you took a change to set your story in a time other than the present or Fuedual Japan.

-Serenity

This is AWESOME! PLEASE update! I'm looking forward to it! :D

Wow your story is absolutly amazing i know im a little late with reading it and all but i saw some of the fan art and just HAD to see it but unfourtunetly your link doesnt work and i waould really like to read the extended version do you think you could send it in a link or leave it on my DA account hope im not bothering you im KATAANGFOREVERanEVER on both YOUR SOTRY IS AMAZING!

Hello!i'm a new reader. Your story is really good, i like the fact that it's in Kemit.
I'm only in chapter two, but i'm enjoying it a lot. Starting of with miroku was a really original idea, at first i couldnt guess it was him! oh, and the deity thing fits perfect for ceirtain stuborn person i know...
Anyways! the fic is really great and i'll try reading it whenever i have time. May i repeat the egyptian thing was cool? i dont know, i always loved Egypt and i get memories from there wenever i read...well, Adios!

Ah! I finally finished re4ading this ch! Ya know, it took me several tries to do so. Lesse, I've been working on at least three stories, plotting and drawing the cover for my IY doujinshi, watching children, catching up on other fics, etc. Quite a busy life. Ha ha. It's a good story, though. And that's saying something, taking into account that I don't like InuKag that much. Well done.

Actually, this is quite good!
-tsv

Your links aren't working. Fanfiction likes to screw around with links, and I've had the same problem before. You have to type the link with spaces in it, or else it gets deleted. Like this: w. fanfiction. net/ ...

If you can send me the link, I'll be really happy. And I promise that I'm over eighteen, almost nineteen.

i love this story but my retared computer wont let me and it to my favorites

What a great story! I've heard so much about it on deviantART, so I looked it up here, and I am not dissapointed. One thing, though, when changing perspectives, such as from Inuyasha to Naraku, put in a mark, a line, something to denote that it has changed.

I'll have to finish the rest tomorrow, sadly, as its late, and I need to get to work.

I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter update soon please! P.S. How can I get the unedited versions of the chapters? tell me when you can! ^_^

How do I get the unedited chapters again? I can't understand what you mean up at the top! ch. 7-14. Please tell me! love this story! ^_^