yeah you probalbly got this quote a good 50 time but its true ..." you forgot about Fluffy and Rin " but thats okay I was kinda hoping for 5 chapters more about sorting out thier problems...the true wedding night ...yeah I know but I love long stories and this this was definatly good and would definatly be better if it was longer.

AW
thanks i was wondering what happened to RIn and sesshy!!

Anyway i liked the story and i liked how you desided to keep it real!

Aww! I loved it, too adorable! I liked how it was realistic and I thought, amazingly in character. I also think that this Kagome was closer to the Manga Kagome rather then the anime one, which is something I really like, although I don't know if it was your intention since you said she had brown eyes, but it was something I really liked about the story. Excellent work!

Kipcha

Great story, and very good detailed. It was truely a joy reading it. Congrats...

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I agree with Inuyasha. It was the cowards' way out. But I want a happy ending. I do.

**! I said no leters!

Sorry. But I want them to talk it out, not write damn ** letters! Talking is more personal!

Okay, I'm calm, and I apologize for swearing. I know that it's your story, it's already finished, and that I should get a life. :) So you know, I still like the story.

If she writes a letter or some crap, I swear it won't work. I like Inuyasha's parents so far. :)

:) Sufficiently impressed. There was development for all three in the same chapter! :) Love it.

:) Nice job on Sango's emotions and reactions when she woke up. The same goes for Kagome during and after the kiss.

:) Lovely job. :) On the ending especially.

Nice job on the Inu/Kag scenes--and that includes their fighting. I also liked how Inuyasha convinced Miroku to watch over Sango.

:) I like realistic romance too. Awesome descriptions of the battle.

Yes, Hiraikotsu is spelled right. Nice Sess/Rin interaction and Sango was done quite well.

Go Kagome! :)

:) Sweet how worried he was for her and how he's helping Kohaku. Excellent again!