Um...are you saying Mirracon raped Lexia (if she still had a seven year old's mind that's what I'd call it). Poor Lexia. Oh, and poor Eric. He just can't keep from getting tortured and now he can't see. I really have been enjoying these series of yours.

Your stories are wonderful. (So, like...what's up with author's and their lovely cliff hangers?) -smile- The promised updates sound really nice. I'll be waiting excitedly with everyone else.

Merry writing!

-Hannah

oh..what! When is the other one posted? Can't wait!

Wow. . .what a cliffhanger! Gah and now I've got to wait forever for the next story! Very good though.

ARGH!

I HATE cliffhangers! And this one more than most ...

You better continue this soon, or I'll park Binky with you!

No fair, a cliffie again!

Anyway, wow, incredible suspense in the first section, and not letting up much at all. Really liked all of the characters' reactions.

Lots and lots of loose ends for the next story to pick up - Eric's situation (I suspect there's more to it than meets the eye - excuse the pun), Al's identity, Rick and Alice, and more.

Excellent job, and I'll be waiting impatiently for the next part of the series.

Very intense and intersting. I like LIA she/he is great..love minding stuff you got there.

MOre.

Oh, terrific stuff!

I think I'm going to like LIA. :)

More soon, please?

As always, beautifully plotted and executed. The kids, especially Alice, who has become more mature before our eyes, were very impressive. Liked the interaction with Eric, especially the change in him as the action went on, but I certainly hope you won't leave him like this.

The final confrontation was very tense, and LIA is an interesting development too. And the truth about Al...

I think we get at least one more chapter to wrap up...

I'm amazed that I seem to be the only one who's noticed, but... Hordak? Anyone else flashing back to the He-Man and She-Ra cartoons besides me? :)

I had to enjoy Kim making a fool of Kerin in the courtroom, although I was surprised none of the originals' identities were known by that time. (Although that explains why the Master hadn't been prepared for that tidbit of information...)

Loving this, but you know that already. ;)

whoo hoo...i was ready to jump into the court while kim was giving her testmony...annd out with the other "It's Morhping time" lol...silly ain't it?

Great chapter, can't wait for the next...

OOh, interesting! Great instalment. WAnt more.

Thanks for rescue from a boring afternoon and the cold I seem to be getting -

Great scene between Wes and Kim, very touching and insightful. Good courtroom stuff. And nice to see the kids being such good detectives, which leads me to the fact that this has shaped up as a fastinating combination of mystery and conspiracy. I love to read an intelligent story with intelligent characters, and this is a great example.

On edge for the action that seems to be coming up...

OOh, me likes! Good stuff. And exactly HOW many new snags are you planning to incorporate here? :)

*looks at the screen in an intersting way* oh...

More trouble? that's my middle name!

This story rocks girl!