You have a real way with supporting characters, like Kerin and Carmen, making them quite vivid and impressive.

Very nice scene between John and Rocky, too, and between Alice and Namir (I like him). But I'm depressed about Jackie.

And things seem to be getting worse. I'm on the edge of my seat here... more soon!

ARGH! need...the...next...chapter...soon...*faints*

Wow. . .poor Kim, to have to see Eric that way. . . Man, I'm hanging in suspense to see what happens next!

Very interesting, but a lot of plot threads to keep track of. Nice developments between Alice and Rick. Alan Drake seems more and more - um - familiar.

Looks like some intense stuff coming up. The prison visit and Wes's reaction to Eric's appearance were wonderfully done.

Can't help it, I think Eric's suffered enough already too - *sigh*

Okay ...

when the heck will you explain all the hints and secrets in this? I'm gonna kill you ... well, if the suspense isn't killing me first, that is ...

Great stuff. Want MORE. Now.

uh huh you really twisting this aren't you? well good luck for untwisting it...will be reading for it _

Wow, a long chapter, and a goodie. A very complex plot, done excellently. But you have me worried about Jackie Bennett, got to like her in a very short time. And where's Eric?

Just as an aside, Central City is where the Flash of the 60's and 70's hung out - more comics trivia.

Great job as usual ... and now that the SI Chest is free again to use on you, m'dear ... get crackin', or else!

Oh. . .suspenseful chapter! Poor Eric! Can't wait to see more! *bites nails in anticipation*

Quite a chapter! Strong content, as you warned us, but very well done. The suspense is definitely starting to get to me...

The incident with Gina was shocking but tastefully done, and a bit of realism. As for Eric, I'm on the edge of my seat... till next week... (and I liked Officer Drake)

*gasps* oh no...no...this can't be happening...backstabbing Time force...damn that Chisholm...hope he rots in hell...

post the next one soon!

OOh, nice.

But too many cliffhangers. *sigh*

Now where did I leave that chest?

Rach, all I can say is this. Awesome season of Far Future so far.

Hope the rest is just as good.

Quantum Thunder

ah, excellent. well written, good pacing, wonderful characterizations. i wish someone from disney would stumble across this and decide it needed to be made...

Oh...interesting. Now that you have my full attention...post more soon!