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| Alex B. Goode 2007-09-16 ch 3, | abuseWrite more fics about Archie buying a car. Write a first fanfic on the Jefferson's. |
| needles 2006-06-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseGreat story. And also totally in character. |
| AITFHATER 2006-02-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseALL IN THE FAMILY IS THE STUPIDEST MOST RACIAL AND SEXIEST AND BAD MORALED SHOW TO EVER EXIST IN THE WHOLE ENTIRE WORLD! |
| E. Harper 2006-01-06 ch 3, anon. | abuseHee hee. Cute and written almost entirely in character. Can you expand on this? Or maybe put it entirely in script format or novel format instead of trying to mix the two? |
| WhiteTiger3944 2005-12-28 ch 3, | abuseHAHAHA! Love it, really funny. |
| Dibsthe1 2005-10-02 ch 3, | abuseDear God... this was a riot. I could vividly hear all the characters saying those lines!! The ending was a bit sudden and anticlimactic, but other than that, a truly amazing job! |
| Linds 2005-01-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed reading this, since there aren't many of them. I really do hope you keep writing this fanfic! I love Archie Bunker, he reminds me of my Gramps... |
| Dubya Kerry 2004-10-30 ch 3, | abuseGood story, but I suppose that cars would be hard-pressed to go too many places in the city anyway. In Manhattan, for example, traffic is so backed up thatr the New York Subway got passengers in the 1970s anyway, in spite of being dirty, slow, graffiti-covered, and infested with bums. While the situation is better in Astoria, Queens, there would still be traffic concerns, bad American car or no bad American car. I wonder if Archie would favor the Volkswagen more if he knew the Nazis had originally conceived of it, anyway. ("Hippies and '**'", eh?) |
| EllaFreak 2004-09-28 ch 1, | abuseHey, I just came upon this section and found your story. I think its great! Nice job! How did you get fanfiction to make an all of the family section? If you don't mind letting me know that would be great. My email is GDaskal664@ I liked this story a lot, write more! |
| Jack 2004-02-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseDude...this is as good as an actual episode of "All In The Family." You have these characters nailed -- especially Archie, and everyone knows you can't have a good "AITF" fic if you can't get Archie right. Abso-frickin'-lutely hysterical! |
| RayvynS 2003-12-31 ch 3, | abuseThis was an interesting story and it was great to see everyone in character. Poor Archie.. not only does the world do him wrong (or so he thinks) but so do Edith's toenails. Loved that part! |
| Justin Macri 2003-10-06 ch 3, anon. | abuseHi i am Justin, I liked your story not bad. It was good and well i seen the series. Do you like Knight Rider? Why not make one with Arch meets KITT and the Family is having Lone probloms with the house. They Hire Flag for the job and Arch can't beleve a talking car |
| Steve Charlton 2003-08-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseVery good- the dialogue was veytr much like the characters. I could imagine Archie looking at Edith and giving one of his one-liners. |
| Alameda 2003-08-12 ch 2, | abuseThank you!AITF is my all time fav show. You did their personalities perfectly and its something that you might see on an episode. Poor Archie He's my fav and Edith too please continue |
| Lucy Beaumont 2003-08-08 ch 1, anon. | abusePower to you starting a new TV show with fanfic! -Lucy |