 Dina 2008-07-18 . chapter 9 I feel really sorry for Vyse, losing Roy so fast after them being together for more than a year. T.T Althought I'm glad Roy ended up with Link--not that I didn't know it was going to happen XD --read smash files--. Anyhow, I think I'm a complete Roy/Link fan now. I love your writing. It's so detailed and... how to put it... just alluring. It flows, and draws you in. Great Job!... although I wonder if you'll read this. xp It seems you haven't updated in awhile... xp I hope you're still writing somewhere out there, though. |
 princesspyro296 2007-05-01 . chapter 9this was so sad...very very very sad ending*sobs softly*Great story...i love sad romantic stories. |
 Audunke 2006-06-06 . chapter 1 Ooh, sorry, that previous review should have been in your SFBI story! I will go post that right now! Apologies~~!! |
 Audunke 2006-06-04 . chapter 9 That was wonderful =) I absolutely love how much thought you put into all of the characters' personalities, especially Roy's! It's like you make them your own, it's amazing.
You describe every single thing so well, and I like how you make the relationships soo...romantic. Hehehe, I can't really find a better word for that but sometimes I read stories and they're supposed to be love or whatever, yet it just doesn't feel like it, and I admire how you manage to do it without going overboard.
One thing is though...how could you just leave us hanging there! What is going to happen to Roy...this is insane! You must update soon (please?). I am so sure there are tons of readers still waiting for this story to be updated!! =3
Well, that's all! I hope this review is not too long, and please don't abandon this story! Thanks! |
 Lota 2006-05-27 . chapter 1 DAMNIT YOU ** **. WHY DID YOU MAKE IT SO ** SAD.
OBVIOUSLY
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DONT
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HEART
YOU SUCK
YOU MIGHT HAVE KILLED POOR VYSE AND SPIT ON HIS COLD BODY BEFORE WRITING A SAD LINK/ROY SUCKING STORY
I HOPE SOMEONE CUTS OFF YOUR ** ARM AND MAKE YOU EAT IT WITH YOUR OWN ** THAT COMES OUT OF YOU **
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GO AND DIE! |
 Azuru 2006-04-08 . chapter 1Woot! sounds very interesting. ^^ Sadly though, I don't have time right now to go on and read it, but when I do I'll come back and review again. XD |
 Empty Thought Bubbles 2005-07-28 . chapter 9aw... i liked the Vyse/Roy pairing... tat was a sad ending |
 Who? 2005-05-01 . chapter 1 May I ask who Vyse is? |
 Ookkaayy... 2005-04-30 . chapter 9 UPDATE! But why'd ya make them gay? Goods pairings.. but stil... |
 Dancing Ballerina Corpse 2004-11-23 . chapter 9ice: so so SAD! your story was so good great job it really made me feel like crying and it crushed me deeply in a way so strong and great and poor vyse and roy and link and and *sobs* IT WAS SO GREAT YET SO SAD! |
 Melee Master1 2004-06-12 . chapter 8I LOVE it!
That story is awsome, kinda sad, too.
Oh well, i love sad SSBM stories, anyway! |
 Moiras 2004-04-18 . chapter 9Truthfully, the ending touched me deeply...
It was indeed extremely, extremely sad. I guess it's because I can somehow relate...If anything like that happened to the one I love...I would be devastated, completely and utterly.
Bravo story and ending! I tend to like sad endings even if I suffer a lot from them- heh. Also, Vyse being my favourite pirate of all time might have something to do with it...*wink*
Once again, bravo. You deserved more reviews. =) |
 abcdefghifjklmnopqrstuvwxyz 2004-04-03 . chapter 9Very good. It was only a tiny bit ordinary, but I liked it.
Well done!
I really want someone to read my story:
Super Smash Bros: Melee IDENTITY
If you wanna read it, that is.
Again, well done! |
 Kamaya 2004-04-03 . chapter 9WAHO!*applaudes,yells,whistles*Great.Excellent.The ending was cool.Now,you can focus on The Inquisition,also,i think Noggare is good,so thats something else to focus on.Anyway,this was great. Keep Writing these great fics. |
 Kamaya 2004-03-08 . chapter 8Poor Roy..er..um..i can't say much else besides...KEEP UPDATING! |