 Kitty9167 2009-07-12 . chapter 5please, update. this is very good. :) |
 Magic Crystal Rose 2008-04-28 . chapter 5I love how your story gives a decidedly fresh perspective of Percy. I notice you haven't updated in a while, I hope it's not discontinued. |
 Angelde1 2007-08-09 . chapter 5This story is just... amazing. And you really need to update. I was so tempted to print it out and read it without sitting at the computer. Yes, it was that much like a good novel!
So your fabulous. Now update before we die. |
 spitfire 2007-02-05 . chapter 1 Huzzah! you have no idea how happy I was to find this. Harry is so wonderfully slappable I love it. The bit in the opium-den warehouse was hilarious. Percy makes me laugh. I love reading good fanfiction. Update. Now. |
 Tamsin1013 2006-07-22 . chapter 5Please say this isn't abandoned! It was rec'd to me the other day and I was told you had waited a year between updates before. I love this story. Please don't give it up, pretty please! |
 bon chocolat 2006-05-16 . chapter 3Hey, Viola. I'm Tayler, and I have recently become a huge fan of your Potterverse fics. They are some of the most well written stories I've seen on I would place you in my top three favorite (fanfic) authors, I'm so impressed with your writing. My only problem? Your characters aren't right. The character you have portrayed most accurately is Ginny, but only in this story. I've found Neville, Harry, and Percy to be most out of character. Tom in "Dreamwalk Blue" would be excellent, except I can't really see him being so attached to anyone else. Dumbledore said himself that Tom Riddle wouldn't have respected anyone so much as to make them a friend, let alone a life partner. I found your Mrs. Longbottom very interesting, however. Have you ever written original work? My guess is you would be much more comfortable there than in the land of canon.
-Tayler |
 blazingfirewolf 2006-04-11 . chapter 5I really, really love this. The interaction between Percy, Ginny and Kingsley is absolutely wonderful.
Now, if only there were an update... *wistful sigh* |
 Simon 2006-01-23 . chapter 5 Hi, just wanted to say I've really enjoyed this story, and hope that you can update soon! |
 Ann-MCN 2006-01-21 . chapter 5Hello! I was reccing this story to a friend and none of the Schnoogle links worked. I am so glad to find it here, even if the formatting is kaput.
Please, I hope nothing is wrong in your life -- I'd love to read more of this. |
 "i just got stuck on a cliffy" 2005-12-15 . chapter 5 aw, come on! it's such a wonderful story, i absolutely love it! one of the best i've read. i think you should update, please would you? and throw in Spike as well, to liven things up! |
 Aries Zodiac 2005-11-18 . chapter 5Best damn story I've read in ages! And finally Percy isn't gay! (Yet). Enjoying this one immensely- i'm a P-fan and there's not enough good P-stories on the net! I think you're being a bit ** Harry...and Arthur. Yeah, he's ** off, but will P ever reconcile with his family?
But enough of my griping- this is a wonderful story, on my fave list and definately staying there! I hope to read more of it soon! |
 Aries Zodiac 2005-11-17 . chapter 1Unfortunately, I have to go so I can't finish this VERY good-looking story, but I will definately be back! You've got a ver interesting writing style- HP, obviously, but a bit of Douglas Adams? in there too. Makes a good mix! Definately an entertaining read!
So I will be back ( with more reviews!):)
AZ |
 Ace Ryn Knight 2005-10-30 . chapter 5This is absolutly fabulous, a story portraying Perdy in a good way is so had to find. The chapter lengths are brilliant and Percy's wit is simply amazing. You've got me on the edge of my seat and I do wish you'd update soon, however unlikely that may be. I'm definately going to add this to my C2.
~Ever Wondering What Will Happen Next~
~Ace~ |
 Cre 2005-08-23 . chapter 5 This is a great character study; I am particularly impressed with how you've handled the characters of Percy, Ginny and Harry. Please keep up the good work! |
 Jenny 2005-07-30 . chapter 1 This fic is great. Please update it soon. |