That...made me sad. :( I've been reading angsty fics today but this one really really made me sad. Gah.. Oh... Poor.. pikachu and ash.. and.. :( Like, there was even this gasp outloud thing going on when I realized who it was. Worst possible.. i mean, most painful.. gah.. :( Um... I noticed you have two other fics that I have not read yet...I'll look at em either today or tomorrow.. Tat's all *^_^*;

"mama papa forgive me" is part of the song before thirty minutes. tatu may be lesbos, but they write songs that don't always talk about that. and even though they are, doesn't mean that there's anything wrong or that they should change.

I need to pick up that CD next time I got out, which will be when the gas shortage is over, which is hopefully soon.

*wimper* That's all I can say.

No need to apologise; this is very good - very descriptive and emotional - the song fits perfectly. Ash is very well written and I was almost crying over Pikachu. (And I'm not really fond of him/her anymore) S'not fair, though. I've lost my Taty album...

Great story. Keep up the writing.

Apologise? Why you apologise? This was bloody good. (Sniffles.) I don't even like Pikachu, and yet you made me sad to see her so injured, on death's door...

Omg...that was soo incredibly sad! But so well written! *Maura*

*sniff* Great one Kaz. So emotional and raw, but beautifully and delicatlely written. I loved it!

This song fitted in perfectly to your story. Still have to get the t.A.T.u album.

Keep up the great work, Karen.

(sniffs) No need to apologise Kaz, this was really well done. Poor Ash... I could really feel his pain. More writing is needed from you ^^

Its an almost sniffle...