 XxDarkWitchXx 3/12/04 . chapter 4I like the poems! Keep on writing them! - |
 corset bruises 12/26/03 . chapter 4Love your poems. "A Warning" was my favorite though; the hidden note (suicide, suicide) was nicely done. Write more?
- crimsonXsnow
P.S. Yes, Poe rocks and yes, again, I'm highly aware that it was random. |
 totalyfab 12/22/03 . chapter 4I loved them. 4 of the BEST poems I have ever read on fanfiction.net or anywhere basicaly. My favorite was Only Way Out. Keep it up *_* |
 Razielim Vampiress 9/8/03 . chapter 4Raven-Wow.O_O
Mokuba-Intense. Alot like your poems, huh?
Raven-I guess. Wait, you mean yo're not effected by any of this?
Mokuba-By what?
Raven-You. Have. The. Attention. Span. Of. A. Cheese. Sandwich.
Mokuba-Yup._
Raven-I don't know why I love you, but I do. Anyways, really intense. Me likes very much.
Mokuba-(reads poems)What!O_o
Raven-HA HA! Knew you'd be effected!
Mokuba-SHUT UP ONNA! Before I get my cattle prod of doom!_
Raven-Ok. I think I'll end this review right now. Ja ne! |
 Hainowai 8/14/03 . chapter 3hm...pretty good..._ |
 Thala 8/3/03 . chapter 3ok i'm really really bored and i wrote out all the cap letters and they spell:
suicid suicde
help me to understand this... |