this was so cute! i loved it.

I'm not usually a poetry fan but this one was nice, with a good flow to it. The content, as it applies to Lucas, is highly subjective, depending on what you think was his relationship with his parents.I don't know if it truly represents his life before seaQuest but hey, it's your poem. :-) I like how he triumphs in the end. You really couldn't call it Them, because it's not grammatically correct.(Them took away my hope...) I like how you turned the first word of the sentences into the title.

Good, but this would be better if called "Them" since "They" sounds a little too unfinished. Good poem though. Keep it up.