Omg! I love this story! Update

i wub it plz write more son k its jus so freaken good man u kinda skared me in da beginnin

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

More please!! T_T

ah put up your next chapter soon great stuff you]ve written but put up the next one quickly im hooked on the story please

great fic. can't wait for the next chapter. i really want to know what is going to happen next.

PLEASE tell me you're updating soon? i'm hooked. like bad. please please please? i promise if just one of the writers i reveiw actually givews me more i'll put up my own story... especially if you update yours. just enough murder mystery and tangible desire to keep me begging for more.

please?

Wow! That was really good! But I'm confused @.@ Why is chapter one and two are the same?? Well update soon!!

please keep going i have to know what happens!

I promised you a seventy character review (which includes commas and the like by-the-way) for a secret reason, and so I shall keep my word. First off, why has not everyone else reviewed your awesomenessistic story? (I made that word long and so wrong so I used up more characters. hehe) The beginning started off slow, but towards the middle and end, it began to get good. I love some of the quotes you wrote on here, such as "Screw dreams-that was a damn nightmare." There were quite a few more quotes that I enjoyed reading, but I already shared that with you on Money Sucking Numbnuts(r) Instant Messenger. The ending was very sudden and made me want to read more of your story. (When do we get to see some killing action?! :P)

wah! I just realized that 70 characters is like equivilent (sp?) to one line. -_-;; You tricked me.

Overall, nice story. It deserves more recognition though. But seriously, I gotta admire you. If I recieve less than 5 reviews for a chapter, I discontinue it. -_-; *must break bad habit*

*steals Darien from ficcie* muwhahahhahah

x) Damn, Mae. You know how much I absolutely *luf* this story. ^_^ You've worked so ** it, and it's just AWESOME! The dialogue is extra witty, the grammar/vocab is extra perfect, and Darien is just oh-so extra sexy. ^^

*glomps* I'll be buggin' you for more! ^_^ LYLAL~~

update

Hi Mae! I like the story so far! The begining seems a little slow, but by the time I finished the chapter, I was hooked! Keep up the good work. Ja.